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Aa, are you kidding! Sasuke might just be about to have sex with some random dude to find Naruto and Naruto has to go and kill Sasuke after all that?!

But nice chapter xD

O_O

I'm... speechless? I mean - that was just... god I'm not sure. It's like - yeah... whoa.

*tries to get past shock*

I think I need a moment to myself or something, that's how much that affected me, I mean I had some idea of what was coming but now - now you took that and made it so much worse and then threw that at us at the end? That was just - not - very nice :s but *takes deep breath* I'll give a proper review.

As usual it was really well written, I mean the tension just flowed right through it and I could never quite get rid of the sense of foreboding I got as soon as I saw the warnings, I was afraid to read what would happen next but I've known this fic was dark from the start so I just prepared myself for it but for some reason as soon as it hit the ending point of sasuke's conversation with Asuma - I started to feel a little... not sick, that's not the right word but I was swallowing a lot and just, generally feeling this weird thing at the pit of my stomach and then - it got worse >.< and I wanted to MURDER Orochimaru like - just stuff him in a torture chamber and damn it pull his heart out with a spoon - just spoon it out while he was still conscious that F****** B******!!! Now that I'm getting over it I'm just so damn angry about the situation Naruto's in!!! That twisted fuck!!! Gahh and those stupid brothers and KARIN gaah words can't describe what I want to do to them honestly -I just want them all to die in the most painful way EVER!

But then all I have to do is remember the end and what Orochimaru asked Naruto to do and the implications of what could happen whatever choice Naruto makes were hitting me so damn fast it just made that sick feeling in my stomach even worse. >.< this is so horrible this is just - so damn fucked up god i want that stupid snake asshole dead - and Kabuto - sick bastard.

That was just - I don't know - I mean I guess cause you got this reaction it means you wrote it damn well - and now - it's just you know, wow. I just wasn't expecting it to be this - I don't know because you didn't make it graphic but everything got across so vividly with little tiny touches on details, I mean you did a really amazing job of writing this - so congrats lol

Still the most amazing ficI've ever read, if nothing else, this chapter just made that even more true because I read it and I'm just anxious to read more - although seriously, I think I'll be thinking about this for the rest of the night which is not cool! cause it's got really bad events that I'd rather not think about but then now I'm thinking fuck what's Naruto going to do! He wants to save his cousin more than anything! But then if he does that and - damn it Sasuke - he cares for Sasuke, maybe not to the extent he cares about Ino but Sasuke means a lot to him as things stand and - this is just awful :(

... so there you have it - my review...
i think i need some water cause there's something weird on the back of my throat

oh man... poor Naruto and Ino... almost better to let her die after what she had been through.. talk about the mental scaring!!!

hmm.. proof.. well.. the FBI can fake Sasuke's death.. give Naruto the proof he needs...then Naruto can give them the drive in the fox so they have the proof they need and wham! slam the door on that slimy sob!!

looking forward to the next chapter!!!...^^..

Damn aff keeps cutting up my reviews >=O!! I want you to read it all! Not parts of it dammit! *throws a fit*

Zrina-sama.. >_< Kabuto that sadistic prick >__> Orochimaru is a bastard if ever i'd seen one. Of course he'd not only let them beat Naruto unconcious, but he subjects Ino to rape as well! I hope he gets it really bad in the end! He can't die quickly or go to jail! He needs to suffer *goes on a rampage* Gyah i'm fearful for Sasuke =( He's gonna have to submit to Asuma unless he can talk his way out of it, which i doubt he'd try to do anyway since he's so hard pressed to find Naruto.
Since i can't remember what else i had written i guess i'll end here.. I await, albeit apprehensively, the next chapter C_C this is such a ridiculously well written piece of fiction! Gettin me all homicidal over loveable ninjas thrown into a alternate universe xD Keep up the beyond awesome work!! *glomps* <3

Ok you know how I feel about the Naruto torture, so I’m gonna review the Sasuke part and attempt to keep myself from launching at you and demanding why you aren’t fixing things XD

I so so so so did not see the Asuma thing coming. Seriously. I should be able to tell something of what goes on in that head of yours by now right? right? WRONG! :( I feel so awful for Sasuke’s ass, ASUMA HAS A SCARY COCK! any sane person would run away! Far away! I like how you have Asuma though, despite the scary cock and all, I still like him, which is you know.. a strange feeling considering his SUPER SCARY COCK! *runs away from the cock* don’t even think of pointing that thing at me. I liked the build up to it too, it wasn’t just a conversation, everything Sasuke said had an action, like Super-cock man reaching for his desk drawer XD

Ok, you know what? I LIED! I AM GONNA REVIEW THE OTHER PART AND SCREAM AND BAWL INTO YOUR BOOBIES!

God. Kabuto. He’s worse than Oro, fucking creepy bastard. It just sends shivers down my spine. *sulks* did you have to do all of that? It hurts so much! Poor Naruto, and and and -______________- *sighs* for the sake of plot right? *will hold you to it*

Adi XX

Oh no!!!! Naruto can't kill Sasuke!!! I sure hope he only makes it look like it because Sasuke loves him!!!!

Yeah. Easy choice Naruto. -_-" ANGST. Difficult chapter to read (torture wise), but still very well written. Update again soon please! ~ Jelp

ahhhhh what a place to end!!!
Sigh... more soon please.
Slave

Zrina ;_;... This is some scary shit, lady love!!! What the hell ;_;... But I have to thank you, this could have been a lot worse and I also have to thank you for not going into detail about what happened to Ino ;_;, and God Poor Naruto *HUGS* I'm way too distressed to leave a proper review, but your writing is still amazing and sucks me in, and drives me crazy. I actually thought the part with Asuma and Sasuke was kinda funny, but then I keep having to remember how big you said Asuma is and I'm a little about Sasuke's orifices, lol *HUGS* God I still need hugs. *sniff* After this I demand WAFF!! LOL, yeah don't mind me, I'll love whatever you write even if you decide to torture me with angst *Huggles and goes in search of something fluffy and meaningless* Oh and *snicker* At the beginning you had me screaming out "The proof is in the Damn Plushie!" before I realsied exactly how ridiculous that sounded and stopped *looks sheepish* *chuu*

Zrina,that was amazing! The way Orochimaru was squeezing Naruto it was hurting me and I don't have marbles:) You had me going I thought Ino was going to die. Well maybe just alittle I even hoped she would so Naruto could be free. I was even thinking Orchimaru was going to leave Naruto near dead even more so than what he has already. I was on the edge of my chair.(mouth open leaning into the screen) Then the perfect cliffy:) Love it!!! And the picture of Sasuke(SoD)was beautiful espeically the eyes. I couldn't get the poledancer room?:(