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O.O *Gasp* Naruto is alive? (well I was hoping for that anyway)

First thing's first I have to talk about my favorite part: When Sakura asks him to chose and he choses Naruto straight away, eventhough he thinks he is dead and he will never be with him again. That's just... it's so... *heart clenches* I love it! It's heartbreakingly beautiful, it really is.

I felt bad for him, his life was like a country western song: no love, no job, no fiance... nothing but the gaping hole in his heart. Gosh and to be taken down in such a way thats so... so... knife twisty (yeah I think I need a thesaurus for Christmas) with his relationship with Naruto. The same thing that helped him to find himself, his spark, is the exact same thing that took everything away from him. And you conveyed his desperate emptiness undulating with his absolute feral need for vengeance so well. This made him so in character in that his need for revenge was all he lived for.

And Sakura poor thing, but she will find some one else... I assume. At least she can take solace in the fact that they were not married.

Ooo, and I really wanted to jump through the monitor and strangle Baki or bash his head into his desk (why so violent, Raina?)!!! Calling Naruto a whore?! He's the whore, selling himself for money or whatever he gets from Orochimaru.

You are such a good writer, I wish you could help me out. I enjoy this story so much and I can't wait for your next update.
(Sorry my review is so awful, it's just that I am in awe right now)

- Rai

Gosh damn I love this story!

A great original story, good work:)
looking forward to more...

Suzanne.

Okay - lol this chapter made me feel a lot better although after talking to you - ahh well. I'm not reviewing to talk about somethin that has't happened yet lol so I'll try to stay on track. God, just thinking that Naruto was dead *gulps* and the way Sasuke was acting was already making me ache *sigh* I'm such a softy - and then his boss got the pictures and implied about naruto being a whore and i got just as pissed as naruto - i wanted to knock the bastard down a peg or two and was cheering for sasuke when he went to punch him, sadly that didn't land.

Then Sakura. *sigh* It saddened me a little that even after finding out he was cheating on her, she didn't even shout, she just reined it all in and said she wouldn't sink to his level. I mean I know everyone deals with things differently but - I think think this showed the extent of her repression of herself, almost like a different stage of her insisting on the vanilla sex, it's so passionless it's a little sad. Maybe I'm just seeing things where there's nothing. But still... and then she gave him the ultimatum, and i felt so rpoud of sasuke when he didn't even think about the answer but just said 'him' straight away. I was relieved too about this being out of the way - one less thing for Sasuke and Naruto to have in his head you know?

Then there was Kakashi!!! *glomps Kaka-sensei* awww he's just aww I just love Kakashi!!! And then I loved how you described Sasuke's reaction to Kakashi saying he would've thought that Sasuke would want to know about Naruto's whereabout's more thann Orochimaru's. It was like it took a moment for the words to sink in, I could just really picture his face. And then suddenly, there was hope thrown back into the fic, Naruto might still be alive and now there's this tension all over again. Orochimaru worries me - especially with this 'unhealthy interest' Kakashi mentioned he has in Naruto.

Anyway, to wrap up lol, loved the update (when do i not?)and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chp. this fic is just - just - just >.< I just really love it! Thanks for the update and sorry for the late review!

hina xXxx

oh man... what a place to stop. Please update soon!
Slave

I NEW HE COULDNT BE DEAD,IF HE HAD BEEN I WOULDNT BE SURPRISED IF SASUKE KILLED OROCHIMARU THEN HIMSELF A YEAR OR SO LATER THE SAME DAY NARUTO DIED.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON WANNA KNOW IF IT IS HIS BODY THEN BE DEPRESSED IF IT IS FOR A WEEK OR SO

I would just like to tell you that I hate this couple with a passion and yet I was drawn to your fic. I actually like it no I love it. The plot is actually good and I read all 11 chapters in one sitting. I hope Sasu kills Oro for hurting Naru. Until next time ^.~
~Ana~

Omg, don't, don' try to kill me like that. Don't have Kakashi going on about Naruto being alive and then say he doesn't know. That, that's just too cruel. And Ohh noooess!! LOL, I wanted to pop your cherry on this story!! ;_; Damn Elicit!! LOL, nah well it's wonderful *hugs u*. I have so many pics planned for this, LOL, there's not enough time in a day. This was one helluva an emotion packed chapter. Jam crammed honey, but I loved it all!! Sasuke being all angsty and righteous!! But LOL, you better believe I could only enjoy it cause I know Kakashi's right. LOL, or maybe I just have faith that despite everything you're not as wicked as you'd like to be. I keep getting antsy every time he hugs up the damn fox though, LOL. I'm like "Look in Pot!!" idiot, LOL. Although technically a stuffed animal isn't a vessel, so LOL, the analogy isn't quite as sure, but still, and Damn I want those pictures!! LOL, Share Sakura!! Share!! LOL, hhhmmmnn, Damn it!!! LOL, not enough time in a day!!! LOL, *Glomps* thanks so much for the update honey!! You rock my universe *chuu* XD.

Better not kill of Naruto....
update!

So, Sasuke will get to find out if Naruto is still alive or not. I'm glad he chose Naruto over Sakura!! Now if only Naruto knew about it. :D Thanks for the new chapter!!

I feel rather bad for Sakura - finds pictures of her fiance doing the guy she thought was cute, found out they had sex in her house, and then her fiance picks his dead lover over her. Ouch. I feel really bad for her. ::sigh:: Anyway, of course I had hoped Naruto wasn't dead. Poor Sasuke though. So many up and down emotions. Loved the chapter! ~ Jelp