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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Felt like cheering when Sasuke picked Naruto over Sakura when she said its time to choose...
and he didnt even hesitate about it either..woot lol.
Great chapter...i hope Naruto isnt being tortured or something *cry* I'm hella worried 'bout that.
and he didnt even hesitate about it either..woot lol.
Great chapter...i hope Naruto isnt being tortured or something *cry* I'm hella worried 'bout that.
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You got alot into this chapter:) As Sasuke said the career,fiance. Thank goodness news that his lover might still be alive! Loved it! :)
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay. Because we all knew he wasn't dead... unless your evil. :P
And maybe Sasuke can still make his way out of this offically and live happily ever after. No pitty for Sakura though... who wouldn't give Sasuke anything he wanted in bed? :P
And maybe Sasuke can still make his way out of this offically and live happily ever after. No pitty for Sakura though... who wouldn't give Sasuke anything he wanted in bed? :P
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg...I need more...It was good. I'm glad that there is hope for Naruto! I loved the way sasuke said without hesitating that he chose Naruto. : D keep it coming!
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O O_O O_O O_O O_O!!!!!
Omigosh!
(I know he's not really going to be dead {right?}, but I can't help but think, Ohmigosh! poor Sasuke!) :(
Omigosh!
(I know he's not really going to be dead {right?}, but I can't help but think, Ohmigosh! poor Sasuke!) :(
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT CANT BE NARUTO IT HAS TO BE INO OR SOMEONE ELSE RIGHT?OROCHIMARU PLANTED THAT EVIDENCE FOR THEM TO FIND,IM SURPRISED SASUKE DIDNT PASS OUT OR SOMETHING AND TURN SICKLY PALE IN A MATTER OF SECONDS.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON BEFORE WE ALL FREAK OUT FROM NARUTOS 'DEATH'
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally unfair place to leave it. If Naruto is dead, Sasuke better beat the crap out of Orochimaru. ~ Jelp
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your crime novel just keeps getting better! I'm loving it:) The pics from Sound of Dreams were H O T, very nice!
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>.< Naruto's not dead, he's not dead, he's not dead. he's not dead. not dead, not dead, definitely not dead... right? Because just the thought of him being dead is harmful to my health. Sasuke!!! YES - crush that sob of a snake!!! feed him to the damn snakes he likes so much, chop him into little bits and throw them at them *snarls* bastard! and SAKURA!!! *glares* why couldn't you just not answer the phone? see what happened>? do you see what happened do you do you do you DAMN IT!!!
*deep breaths*
*slumps*
that was just... he's okay, he'll be okay.
It was a good chapter, surprisingly I didn't notice the shortness, I was too busy paying attention to every detail I could to tell myself Naruto was alive. This chapter kept me in a constant feeling of dread you know, I was practically eating up the page (despite distractions in the background >.>) and then when Sasuke saw Naruto's id and there was the body was all burnt I felt the same as I did when watching VotE and staring mouthing 'no' at the screen. Kakashi - I wasn't surprised bu it being revealed that he used Naruto as an informant, and I'm guessing he and Ebisu left the scene so they wouldn't spotted there and possibly be connected to it by possibly corrupted (or even the ones that weren't)which could screw up their own investigation but I'm hoping maybe Naruto stumbled out or something and they took him with them. But that's probably not what happened.
It was a great chapter, thanks so much for the update, I really love this fic.
Hina xXxx
*deep breaths*
*slumps*
that was just... he's okay, he'll be okay.
It was a good chapter, surprisingly I didn't notice the shortness, I was too busy paying attention to every detail I could to tell myself Naruto was alive. This chapter kept me in a constant feeling of dread you know, I was practically eating up the page (despite distractions in the background >.>) and then when Sasuke saw Naruto's id and there was the body was all burnt I felt the same as I did when watching VotE and staring mouthing 'no' at the screen. Kakashi - I wasn't surprised bu it being revealed that he used Naruto as an informant, and I'm guessing he and Ebisu left the scene so they wouldn't spotted there and possibly be connected to it by possibly corrupted (or even the ones that weren't)which could screw up their own investigation but I'm hoping maybe Naruto stumbled out or something and they took him with them. But that's probably not what happened.
It was a great chapter, thanks so much for the update, I really love this fic.
Hina xXxx
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
......I...what???? NOOO WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHOT>????!?! Wheres the rest??! urgh i have to know whats going on. Such a mean cliffy! Keep it coming