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for Blackmail and Betrayal

by Zrina

person Allys
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Zrina?? ;_; Don't you fucking love me anymore *sniff* You can't be that mean right? Right?!?!? ;_;, I need a minute... or a year ;_;.
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sure hope Naruto is really still alive!!! But I wonder why Orochimaru would make it look like he killed him? I love that Sasuke wants to avenge Naruto's "death" though!
person Nami
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*face palms* ...okay. That was. Right now, I'm torn between yelling in denile... and laughing till my stomach explodes because my music list has a sense of humor and it was playing Ironside from Kill Bill juuuust at the end. The image of Sasuke in yellow spandex was soon to follow (wedding scene, ah ha... ahahaha... Sasuke would make a beautiful bride *is shot*). ..jeez *coughs and looks at mp3 player*. Anyways, I hope Naruto isn't dead. I panicked a little and thought oh, crap did Oro plant the tag on some other blond male in the group and then like... smuggle Naruto away (which would be bad badbadbadbad. Cause then it'd be Naruto on drugs... or something...std, anyway *panics*)? Then I remembered he wasn't seen leaving. So maybe he fought... his way... out... and ran out the other side? Or he's one of the other bodies? But he can't be... dead. He's too cool to be dead! And where's Ino o___o! Iajajaja... T_T
person Allys
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I read some of your reviews and am trying to calm down. I know I should be holding out hope but God!! I've been watching a lot of depressing yaoi anime lately (they're short 2 ep ovas) I think it's warping my brain!! It would be perfectly tragic and very realistic for him to really be dead, very japanese, but GOD PLEASE!!! Who wants realism, really!??!! This is why I read stories to avoid real life!! LOL, or at least pretty it up every now and again. I still love you whatever you have planned, but ;_; oh god... I was so freaking happy and excited when Kakashi turned out to be FBI, I was all YEAH!! Storm the building, grab my baby!! And Sasuke, he was so good in this chapter, so desperate and dedicated and loving, this is gonna hit him so freaking HARD!! And he can't even acknowledge it really. He's going to have to sit back and pretend ;_;. God lady love you really are a masterful story teller, even when you break my heart I have to appreciate the beauty of the story line. Crosses fingers and hopes that Naruto was smuggled away in one of those trucks that left and that Ino isn't one of the bodies that they dug up, anad that Oro-bastard doesn't turn Naruto into a fuck toy for this, and that Sasuke finds him sooner rather than later before they both go mad. Holding out hope is harder than it seems, I know they aren't gonna get off scott free something has to give I just hope that the fallout is manageable. I should be up and running again really soon XD, so expect some more art. LOL, I can't wait to see Adi's pic, I don't even wanna know what my inbox on Y! looks like 0.o, but LOL, I'm sure I'll have great fun wading through it. *Huggles u* Miss you muchly, are you still updating this biweekly or have you moved it up to once a week? You updated last week didn't you? LOL, the days have been blurring together. I'm so not good for anything right now, can't even leave you a decent review, I'm seriously heart broken here ♥
person riddle-me-yellow
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NUUU! NARUTO, YOU CANT BE DEAD! Without you there would be no more story and no story would be very sad indeed. This chapter was neat, the Kakashi part was interesting. PLease continue as soon as you are able, I wanna know what happens to Naruto! I bet that stupid meanie head snake face kidnapped Naruto and went to some creepy place where he will take advantage of Naruto untill Sasuke comes to save the day XD hehehe yay!
Well done and i cant wait for the next chapter!
person Kimra
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now I'll carefully state that I believe in you. And I believe that if you killed Naruto you'd do it more dramaticly. I also believe your not insane enough to go against your reviewers and upset us with the death of my beloved vulpine. Having said that... I hope my belief is not misplaced. (I'm really just hoping your nice and give me happy endings! I want happy endings!) :D
person Dragon7
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 was great and I know chapter 11 will be even better so update soon.
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GOD I have been waiting and contemplating and even DREAMING about this story for days, comming up with hundreds of possible cenarios and checking the site every few hours or even minutes, only to have an even worse cliffy...... RAR i wanna cry.....PLEASE PUT ME OUT OF MY MISERY!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE!
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did you just kill Naruto or is it Ino?
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Good Morning, Naruto." Orochimaru said.

I believe this is where we all say "oh shit!"
A.S.