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oh god I fear the worst...AH~ I don't wanna know whats gonna happen. But then again I do...>.< what to do. Please continue!

Cue the music: dun, dun, dun! I had a feeling it was going to be the "bad" police when Naruto didn't recognize anybody following them. I hope Naruto hurts Orochimaru and gets Ino out of there with Sasuke arriving just in time so that Naruto and Ino can jump in the car and high-tail it out of there! Keep up the excellent work, and I look forward to the next chapter. :-) ~ Jelp

Wondeful! I love this story line so much. It like a detective novel with the police and underworld. I'm on the edge of my seat for the next chapter:)

I loved this chapter... just Wow! I can't wait to read the next! ^^

This story is fabulous. I adore Naruto's character, and I love how you write Sasuke in all your fandom.

When Naruto said Buttercup from Powerpuff Girls kicked ass, I almost died.

Can't wait for an update!

ah, fate, such a fickle woman. but of all the things that went on in this chapter, the one thing that won't leave me alone is what the hell was sasuke going to say in the cafe, before naruto opened his mouth and got sasuke's defenses up? urgh, it's going to drive me crazy, lol.

and i hope ino's still alive! i mean, orochimaru may very well have killed her with every intention of killing naruto as well, but he knows he can still use ino to get naruto to do whatever he wants... man, talk about a no-win situation for naruto and sasuke.

i look forward to the next chapter so frickin' much!!!! the days better just fly by, dammit! haha

oh god O_O Naruto! oh god oh god oh god, I guess I was steeling myself for it I really was but then when orochimaru spoke at the ened I realised I hadn't steeled my self enough - NARUTO!!! Oh god, i feel upset and like beating orochimarut o a pulp because I'm almost certain he's going to hurt Naruto, Sasuke can't possibly get there or anywhere in time!!! GOD - I WANT TO MURDER SAKURA!!!!! okay okay *deep breaths* so she didn't do it on purpose but why why why couldn't she just shut up!!!!

>.< *deep breaths* okay

I'm gonna cross out the heart wrenching cliff hanger you left us with there and comment on the parts that made me all mushy!!! They're conversation at breaskfast and Sasuke's thoughts as he watched Naruto sleep I thought was just a perfect follow up to the AMAZING (I won't be reading anything that beats that in a LONG LONG while - if ever!!!) last chapter. You carried the emotions really well into this chapter and it kept us in the flow, it was really nicely done. Their conversation regardring their relationship I thought rang true for their personalities, although I kind of agree with Naruto lol, Sasuke has faulty logic XD heh I don't think he sees one night stands as cheating but hey to each his own - as long as he doesn't do that if he's with Naruto XD

I really loved this chapter I love this whole damn story (can't shut up about it it seems!)I can't stress how well I think this is written and their emotions come across so brilliantly and then there's the plot which is being carried out really well and keeping us on the edge - >.< anyway - it's great! Thanks so much for the update!!!

Hina xXxx

OH NO! Write more!

*bawls*

*bawls*

*BAWLS*

*shakes angry fist at you*

OMFG

*bawls again*

I can't.. its... NOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


ARGH! Zrina baby, you're torturing me here!!!!!!!!!! Why? WHY? :( argh, *stabs Sakura* I'm gonna kill that bitch! I swear!!!!!! *bawls again* your arms had better be waiting ready and open to comfort me because I'm eyeing my pile of sporks at the moment XD You know I loved the morning after scene and the everything else, argh, god *frustration*

:( how could you? Oh I know how you could, because you thrive on the angst don't you!! XD!!

*LOVES THE CHAPTER* the chapters get better and better each time, I have no idea how you do it and I'm so impressed and in awe *clings*

I love watching how how develop Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. Really awesome! Write more!