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Wow! I loved this chapter! ^^

ooh, that was hot!
;p

YOU ARE AMAZING!
I LOVE THIS FIC!
Everything about this story of yours is great, it has everything. You had me flippin out at the part where Sasuke told Naruto that he would protect him. GAH, I wanted to squeel like crazy but its 3 in the morning where I am XP. I LOVE THAT NARUTO TOLD SASUKE THAT HE WANTED TO KEEP HIM! Its the cutest thing ever. The way you phrased that is genious. Such a unique way of saying things... hehehe by the way, its awesome that you are mentioning condoms whenever they have sex, you NEVER see that in fanfics. GOOD JOB!

Keep up the fantastic writting and update whenever you are able <3

Your a goddess (god? I just assume your a girl but don't think I've had any proof one way or another... bet I just insulted you :P ) ANYWAY, I will presume you are girl for a few more mintes:

You are a goddess, an evil goddess but a goddess none the less. I love your writting, but low and behold the facts of hte universe like 'it actually takes time to write stuff' usually interfears with my 'I want it all now' mentality. So really it's nothing to do with you, just me being impatiant. :D

Bet I made no sense. But anway I love your work. I continue to wait for updates as always. :D

Kimra

she asks too many questions, glad you updated hope you can do it again soon

That was a beautiful scene *happy tears* <3 Anata ga daisuki!! Stupid Sakura!!! She's gonna get them caught!! AGH!!! BAKA ONNA! >_< *fumes silently* I await your next update! Keep up the edge-of-the-comp-chair anxious anticipation you seem to always have goin! It makes me, and prolly everyone else who reads your work, happy =) <3

'I want to keep you'

oh my god my chest clenched so hard with that one it was just like - omg omg omg >.< I really really loved that!!! God Naruto is just so - there are no words - I loved the smut LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!! It was smut but it was so intense, it was like they were testing to see how they felt about each other through the touches and kisses and omg that one kiss at the beginning it was just - I just thought it was really well written. And I'm proud of Sasuke too - for contemplating his future, it meant that despite his anger at Naruto for his words before, they did seem to reach and he himself knows that Sakura doesn't hold the kind of life he wants. It was amazing it really was amazing, your writing is amazing - i saw everything so clearly -

okay okay - i'm just ranting but it was really one of my favourite scenes ever in fanfiction it really was. but at the end there - *sigh* Haruno Sakura - well done - well done for probably screwing things up... but I since she's clueess about the whole situation I'll try to not hold a grudge against her... but if this causes trouble for our boys I might just have to - especially after what Naruto and Ino went through they shouldn't have to go through anymore...

It's okay though it's okay cause Sasuke said he'd protect him aww Sasuke *melts*

I really loved this chapter, really really loved it. Okay I'll shut up now >.<

Hina xXxx

OH NO! STUPID SAKURA! Wow, you had my heart pounding by the end of this chapter. Not only because of the fantastically written smut( VERY VERY HOTT BTW ), but because of one of the worst cliffhangers in history. By worst I mean one of the most thrilling :P Gods, you had me worked up. The story is definitely getting more interesting. Sasuke and Naruto's relationship is developing perfectly. I absolutely adore your writing style in not only this story but in your other ones as well. Please keep up the great work and update soon! I'm dying here!

It was oblivious that they were going to get caught because they are both under supervision from their bosses but the way it happened shocked me. I screamed 'Sasuka! That BITCH!' God, they're fucked now. Unless Baki really is a good guy buttt I doubt that. Btw, your smex is the best. Much love~

please dont tell me that is it will u put an update for this on livejournal