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Fuuuuuck!!!! OH God! Fuck! Noooo! Sakura you Idiot! Oh fuck! ... ... ... ... ZRINA!!! What are you trying to do to me!??? First you Absolutely kill me with sweetness. That was AMAZING! Oh my god that was just... Heart Melting!! ♥ And then... Ugghhh!!! They're going to kill him. They're going to kill my blond baby, and Sasuke, and it'll be all over! Nooo! You big Meanie *loves you* When Naruto said he wanted to keep him *died a little*, and when Sasuke got on the couch and pulled up the covers *heart palpitations brought me back to life* and then, "I'll protect you." *died all over again*. LOL, That was soo Gorgeous! You deserve some kind of prize, and omg the slowness. It was so intense and perfect. You are Amazing, this is Incredible and you're freaking me out with that ending, Oh God!!!! *holds head* Lovely lady, you crush me! LOL, and God does this chapter remind me of that song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aiEQysBSnuM

You've Officially Pwn'd. Thank you ♥

O.O

Ok..., so Zrina + smut monster = Drooling, nose bleeding (a la Ebisu when he saw the Harem no Jutsu) Aikage. Yup, thats new math.

Darn you, big mouth Sakura!! I know she doesn't know better, but damn! Baki is not the one *sigh*... Oh man are they screwed.

-Rai

nooooo! damn it! naru gonna be in deep shit now! nice to hear that you have quite few fics line up for our reading enjoyment after you finish this and SoD. it would've be a shame to hear that these were going to be your final works. looking foward to your next update(s)!

~Devious

....Awesome chapter! AH~ It's getting so good. So hot. Keep it coming! : D

Uh-oh! Sakura's gonna get Sasuke and Naruto in trouble - though Sasuke IS sneaking off doing things he's not supposed...to in order to fix things that aren't supposed to be going on. o.O Such twists! Love it! Keep up the amazing work. :-) ~ Jelp

oooh the plot thickens! i love it! i almost cried when naruto said he wanted to keeep him

dammit, sakura!! she just totally went and got their asses in so much trouble!!!! she is so fucking troublesome! DX

anyway, about this chapter... do you know what moved me the most? that during the sex scene, there was hardly any dialogue, just emotions and feelings and thoughts. it was so well done, and so damn hot. and the soft utterances - "i want you", "i want to keep you", "i'll protect you" - those seriously melted my heart. it was so poignant and moving... gah, i am such a romantic!

absolutely fabulous chapter, hon. i am looking so forward to the next chapter, even though i know something's going to go down because sakura doesn't know how to let well enough alone. i mean, who answers the phone so early in the morning? honestly. (yes, ten is early for me XD)

Nice chapter, thanks for the update!

it's *hot*hot*hot*! it's getting *hot*hot*hot*! sorry, that song popped into my head for some reason, and some slight modifications made it perfect for the story. oh well, anyone who's read this fic knows it, i'm just saying it. can't wait to see the rest, i bet it's sexy as hell with an awesome showdown, too. i'm trembling with anticipation *teehee*.

It's wonderful chap. Senks so much!