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for Blackmail and Betrayal

by Zrina

person Jelp
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, as always. Love the little bit about the silk boxers at the end. ^_^ Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp
person Bluesake
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story it was so hot with them on the floor...this is getting so good please do continue it ^^x
person Kimra
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D <- shortest review ever. But it's what I'm thinking. :D
person hisoka
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the benifit thats nice, sakura was eyeing him hard surprise sasuke didnt call attention to it.
update when possible
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God I think I missed the review for the last chapter! Gomen - but this just keeps on getting better and better! In chp 7 i love the way they were slightly awkward when they got to sasuke's house, i found it realistic, i also liked the extra info we got on sasuke and the smut in the kitchen was like WHOA *wipes away drool* so yeah loool,I loved when Naruto was telling Sakura that Sasuke had worked up a real sweat loool but i wanted to cover him up when she started checking him out - like sasuke i suppose looool :D really glad you updated, this story is fantastic ^_6

Hina xXxx
person Rosebud
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this chapter was just Yummy! I enjoyed everything about it!!!
Hehe, Sakura kept eyeing Naruto and Sasuke didn't like it... I loved that part! LOL!XD
Awesome chapter, as always your writing skills leave me wanting more!
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"We had a hard day, a real grind, and he worked up a sweat" LOL. couldn't have described that better myself. i just love reading your work. looking foward to the next update.
person Allys
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.o, *leers* Hehehehehe XD. This just keeps getting more and more sticky now doesn't it XD. LOL, Yummy ;). So Naruto's gonna sleep over huh, :D Well it is what I wanted if not how I wanted it XD. LOL, Sakura checking him out huh XD. Yes!!! LOL, Jealous Sasuke XD, my favourite kind. and Naruto sleeping on their couch in only black silk boxers O.O. You are just spoiling for controversy aren't you XD. I love that Naruto is actually infatuated and not at all jealous of Sakura, LOL, but really he has no reason so... I'm also of two minds about the whole relationship thing. I want them to screw like bunnies!! LOL, but I want them to develop a real relationship too!! O.o, ohhs the indecision!!! LOL, so glad that part is left up to you, you seem to have it firmly under control. Oh Zrina!! Save me from my deviant ways XD!! LOL, *Glomps you* (Big love for keeping it real) I'm glad we're making headway on the case, and now you have me nervous. O.o, commenting on jail time and the faults in the justice system. Hmmm, and I certainly hope that Sakura doesn't do any checking or casual mentioning on/of Sasuke's new 'partner' And Zomg!! Naruto!! “Oh, he’s in the shower. We had a hard day, a real grind, and he worked up a sweat,” he said with a teasing grin. O.o, LMAO!!!!! Thank you so much for the update, honey. *Loves on you and this fic*. Oh and Hooray for scanners ;).
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's funny how Sasuke is possessive over Naruto already and doesn't like how Sakura looks at Naruto. XD Another great chapter!! :)
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man, i was ready for some clawing and eye gouging when sakura walked in. and i don't care how suave sasuke is, how the hell was he not panicking when he walked into the living room to see them together? i definitely would have. i would have been like, "omg, did that dobe say anything to give us away?" and whatnot.

extremely awesome. the grinding was hot, and i really liked the extra touch you threw in there about it being for sasuke, so naruto would just attend to the uchiha's needs. it was all like, "aww."

anyway, this was exactly what i needed after a long day of work. thank you so much for the update! i look forward to the next chapter!!