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more jealous Sasuke, please~!

NaruSasu ohoho I love Naruto in this. =D

Fantasticly SMEXY!! The grinding on the floor was hott....very very hott. You write limes very good, yes you do. This chapter was amazing as usual and your talented writing never ceases to astound me! I love it! The plot is developing so nicely. PLease, please update soon ! :)

another wonderful chapter! please tell me that sakura's going to walk in on them going at it or that sasuke and sakura are going to end their relationship soon. it hurts so much to see them together. gah! i want to know what happens next! why do you torture me?! i luffs you!! i always get so excited when i read this fic. this is definitely the best cop fic ever.

I really like your story! I feel like you capture Sasuke and Naryto perfectly!! Keep up the good work you have a true talent.

yay, new chappie!
ooh, naruto's going to sasuke's place?
nice!
'hope sakura's not there..
hehehe.. ;p

Sometimes I forget to review! YOU NEED TO POKE ME AND REMIND ME!!! XD Don’t be sad about the lack of smut, it just means when smut does come it’s a nice happy surprise and keeps me on my toes :D:D Plus then I miss it and appreciate it so much more.

I love the depth you’ve put into Naruto in this chapter, it shows that he has a mask on, and that he feels and that his job affects him more than it appears. That he doesn’t realise that he’s slowly starting to care for Sasuke. THEY LOVE EACH OTHER! THEY DO. Stupid boys, but sexual tension and repressed feelings make it exciting and frustrating and wanting more all at the same time. I want them to smex yes, but I want them to know they only want each other :D but that’s pushing it :(

I love the banter, the slight insults and teasing, it makes their relationship something comfortable without them realising it.

I’m not gonna scream about Kakashi, *resists urge* even though his lines were sheer brilliance, but because I know you have a few issues with him, I’m not gonna say how much I love you writing him, or uh demand you write more pornshopowner!Kakashi, nope, I have self control *nods* XD yup lots of self control *whistles*

The scene with groping the woman, was funny, kinda sad underlining and more just yelling “hands off, bitch, property of Sasuke” Jealous!Sasuke is fun because he has so many issues with life, that adding another makes it that much more fun to watch.

I WANTED NARUTO TO NIBBLE THAT EAR.

*ahem*…yeah. :D

The plot thickens! :D my favourite line is of course “You aren’t merchandise,” he hissed (quickly followed by Kakashi’s actions with the Sucking Susan :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D)

A dinner date and Sasuke’s house, whatever will happen? :D

Hmm...Naruto meeting Sakura perhaps? I still think it would be hilarious if Naruto knew Sakura or if Sakura and Ino were once friends or something. Excellent, excellent chapter! ~ Jelp

You just had to ignite my curiousity and then end the story line,huh?
Well,I am not disillusioned yet....I will still be sticking around for
the next chapter,so there!!!!!!BUT,don't make me wait too long....
I can't make any promises...^O^...UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

“Obviously not gods of agriculture or hunting.”

Shit...I nearly pissed my pants when I read that. Fucking funny...

SO, Sasuke is going to take Naruto to his house *grins*...Is Sakurabitch gonna be there or is she still at her mommies house crying because she never knew Sasuke liked to fuck dir-tay?

I can't wait for the next chapter. Chinese food and sexual tension oozing from their very pores...

I meant the sexual tenison oozing...not the chinese food.

Sorry...It's late *sigh*

Looking forward to your next one. It's always a pleasure reading your stories.

--onobaby--

NICEE! I can't even tell you how much I love this story! It is progressing very nicely. The writing is just getting better and better and the plot is becoming more complicated with the obvious smexiness :P I can't get enough of detective stories and their just aren't manhy of those around. This one hit the mark! It is defnitely one of my faves. You have some amazing talent. PLease, please update soon :)