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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you rock I love it its so good. keep up the good work. oh TY for updating
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sasukes getten kinky ideas from naruto, i thought hed turn it up just to be mean but he must be sorta a nice guy in this ne.keep it up your on a role!!!
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was fucking hot. good plotline too. can't wait for the rest of the fic.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, what a wonderful way to end it. That was really hot. I shouldn't read stuff like this so early in the morning. Now I'm going to have mushy brain for the rest of the day. Good chapter, I hope that together they can totally bring down that Oro bastard. And I hope they do other stuff together too....yum. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew!! **Wipes sweat off forehead** That was hot, hot, HOTT!! Now the story is definitely getting VERY interesting! I love how it is developing and I love your usage of description. It allows me to picture the scenes in PERFECT **Wink** detail. Somebody got a fan around here?? PLease update soon :)
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH FUCK!!! THAT WAS HOT!!!
PLEASE update soon!! I need more of this story. It's definitely one of my favorites!!!!
PLEASE update soon!! I need more of this story. It's definitely one of my favorites!!!!
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dies of bloodloss* not only is this incredibly hot, I'm loving the plot as well. Please continue! This is too good to be one of those fics that dies away only half finished!
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO!! NO!! IT ENDED TOO SOON...MORE! NEED MORE! LOL Seriously, nice as all your smut is, I was really looking forward to those two actually planning and working together. You make them such a great team in SoD so I can't wait to see them actually interact a bit like partners here. As always, can't wait for the updates, with this or SoD...thanks!!!
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit Zrina!! That was... Gah!! :faints from the hawtness: :blink blink: you're just trying to kill me, in the most pleasurable of ways XD. Damn. I can't even think to give a proper review, I've been staring at this stupid screen for about 9 mins now, and I just keep flashing back, and embellishing :drool: LOL. God, :shakes head: Thanks for the update sweetheart, I think I'll revisit it XD.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed Naruto "dance". Thanks for the chapter.