rate_review Reviews

Okay I give up. I put my faith in you from now on and I'm just gonna read anything your write. I read the first scene for this story ages ago (as in the first segment - I can't recall if it's all a single scene or not) and I loved it. But didn't want to read the story when you added more becaues I was concerned it would be all about Naruto being a bit more of a bastard than he should be and somehow sex and love and all that would end up interwined, but I suspected it would be more deceptive.. or something. I didn't think I'd be happy with it. But I read it today despite everything and am happy to say I'm overjoyed with it. :D

This was... as always brilliant, and well constructed, and I still like Naruto which is always important. :P Was a bit distrubed by and skiped through the Asuma blow-job scene... But that's not the point. :P I love this story, and I look forward to future updates. :D

Kimra

Hey hon, erm I read that end scene too many times to count XD I think that scene is a close second to the first smut in SoD, freaking good

“when everything in his little world came to a complete halt” lol! that made me laugh at Sasuke being dumbstruck at the sight of Naruto when he was fully dressed, hot description of Naruto though all suave and cool, Naruto will slip at some point though XD

It’s a good thing you put all the plot stuff at the beginning of the chapter otherwise I wouldn’t have a clue what was going on if you put smut first, I’d just be rereading the smut :D

KAKASHI! you knew it was coming, that little scene with him was priceless, I love his sales pitch, so freaking funny (YAY FOR ORANGE LUBE! mmm XD)

You see even though you’d already told me just how the scene was going to be set up, my mouth dropped open just like Sasuke’s did when I read about how Naruto was positioned. lol! I love that Naruto is such a tease. Wonder where he gets that from *squints at the author* XD

Everytime I go back to remember something I wanted to comment on, my mouth goes all dry again, the smut is literally hypnotising, I need this brain! I do! It’s vital that it stays functioning XD

“They both moaned as those tanned digits disappeared into tightly encasing heat” Ok it’s not just them moaning as that happened, it’s every single fangirl reading it

LOL! and Sasuke thinking he had control! XDXDXD silly boy. Neon pink. *snickers* it’s neon pink and it’s still really fucking hot. It still cracks me up that when Naruto asked to be turned on that Sasuke automatically went to his pants, seriously, my mind is screaming at me to stop laughing and get on with reading smut. Adi wanted smut and she’s pretty damn pleased.

“While that is very hot, that’s not exactly what I meant,” I LOVE NARUTO. Your torturing of him in this fic is completely forgiven with this smut. Naruto can learn to take the pain, he gets to screw with Sasuke :D

I need water.

And then enter in the remote control. I’m so glad you let Sasuke play with it. I love that they’re watching each other. This is the hottest smut, and I still can’t believe they haven’t touched. They haven't touched and it's as good as if they had touched! O_O!

Good finishing line, you know why? because I WANT MORE. lol I think the more you write the more I want. I’m such a demanding fangirl. The world needs a Zrina strapped to a computer desk. Mm yeah. Definitely
*squeezes the life out of you* SMUT SMUT SMUT. <3 :D love you!

I read this like 3 more times trying to spot the differences, but I kept getting distracted by fucking hot the smut was. lol! You should be glad I don't beta your work, if I did, I'd never spot any mistakes (or boo boos XD), too much pleasure signals to the brain leaves me all dizzy :D

I need water again :D

O_O

O_O...i think... i'm dying of blood loss here...I can't even believe my computer's still working. That was just WHOA

*composes self* right uhh, the review lol well no need to tell you that was hot as hell as you probably know that already. What I will say is that I hope Kabuto dies a very very painful death along with Orochimaru - but if you can't fit that into the story (when you know it reaches the part where you wanna take care of the pricks) some pain at the very least would be very appreciated for what they're doing to Ino and Naruto *glares* bastards!!! *sigh* seems like this fic really isn't going to be an easy ride but XD that just makes it even better heh

Thanks for the update and can't wait for the next one ^_6

Hina xXxx
(p.s. sorry for rambling lol)

WAH! I added more on but AFF decided to cut it off, *kicks it*

uh anyway, I reread the edited version like 3 times and I still couldn't find the differences because my mind kept going all mushy brained XD I can't remember what else I wrote but it was definately a lot of fangirling XD lol if I was your beta you'd have to sack me, I'd never spot the differences when you've written smut *one track mind* XD

need water again. XD

Have fun at the party!

*is boneless after last chapter* your writing rules....

that was so hot!! almost made me forget that naruto actually had info or some such to give to sasuke. and though i don't particularly like her, when are we going to see sakura again? i mean, she doesn't seem like the type to just give up on sasuke. and it would be interesting to get her take on what happened and what kind of person sasuke is to her...

this is such a great story! i don't think anything i could say as praise would do it justice, honestly. but i look forward to the next chapter!!

*closes mouth* Wicked....awesome.

O_O

Damn.

Wow...that was hot. :-) Excellent fic. ^_~ As much as I enjoy the teasing scenes, I also hope Naruto and Sasuke get a chance to talk. Good luck with your writing! ~ Jelp

I swear I feel like attaching myself to you with some handcuffs (that sounds kinky hehehe). I love this story and SoD which I can't remember if I reviewed. I am in love with all your Sasukes. I mean, it's a give that I love all the characters that you write, but it's something about your Sasukes that make me want to just... insert perverted stuff that I am too lazy to type here. GOD. Don't ever stop writing, I think might go into withdrawl if you do. That last part was HOT. *pants like a dog* hahaha I was waiting for Naruto to tell him to cut tit off at the end!

*hugs you and does other things to you to keep your creative juices going.*