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...........wow......out of hand. Very hot, keep going

OK, I've just read everything you have posted on AFF. Each story is tight, and you usually have me hooked on the first chapter. This story is tight, dark and compelling. I am looking forward to see where you take this. Also can't wait for the next chapter of SoD.

"His sinuses had felt fucked up for days afterwards"---Christ! Is that fucking possible. I totally got the most vivid, mental picture of that. I laughed so hard. That shit was C.R.A.Z.Y. At least he didn't fuck him in the ass. Naruto would probably have to do more than breathing exercises for that one...probably have to learn yoga or some shit. Dude...is Sasuke a little bit of a kinky bastard in this one? I feel kink in the future...Hmmmm? Little spanking action or some HANDCUFFS (waggles eyebrows). Looking forward, as always, to next update.

*ahem* I was staring at the screen and once I realized what was happening it was too late. I drooled all over my keyboard. No joke. Hahaha... your writing is damn good.

nice!
good chapter~
m'excited as to what naruto'll plan w/ orochimaru..
write soon!
^_^

An update, yay! I liked the chapter. Sometimes plot is just as fun as sex, if it's good. And this is pretty good. And Buttercup does kick ass...but I don't watch the show either. So how's Naruto going to hit Sasuke close to home? Hmm...I bet it's something good. Can't wait to see where you take this. Good job.

Awesome as always. I totally love this story and the creativity behind it is sooo amazing. Please update because I can't wait to see what happens next!

Man the situation Naruto's in sucks :s but at least Sasuke heard him out - well sort of anyway. It looks like it's going to be a tough ride for our boys but I can't wait to see. Thanks for the update, it was great as usual ^_6

Hina xXxx

O.O, Holy Crap Zrina XD. Didn't know you had it in you, LOL, but I'm not surprised. That shit was Scary!!!! Damn that was technical XD. I really don't like that Naruto has to do that job though :(. He could do a lot worse than Asuma, :sighs: This story is still the bomb. Loved the first scene with Naruto and Sasuke, wasn't nearly as eye-popping as that last bit XD, but it was still sexy. Sasuke seeing himself on tape was hot. I also love how the plot is advancing XD. It certainly seems like you're having a lot of fun writing this story XD. Almost as much fun as I'm having reading it ;D. That was amazingly awesome, and really kind of funny. I could totally see poor Asuma with a horse cock, LOL. And I love that you made the point that most normal people, would have been running for their lives XD. The fact that Sasuke thinks he meant nothing and was just used, wasn't even really wanted is sad though. I mean I don't have any delusions of love at first sight or anything, but he was most definitely wanted, and he's still wanted, so he shouldn't feel completely used. :sighs: It'll make for fun arguments and angry confessions though, and I love those :D, so it's all good. LOL, Ja love. Thank you so much for the update XD.

my god, that was so good. naruto's got skills, that's for damn sure. and i liked how naruto didn't get all demanding and huffy with sasuke. i thought it was so naruto and so sweet that he hesitantly asked for help. and i wonder how he's going to 'hit him close to home.' maybe he could play the family card...

i was wondering... naruto's note at the beginning said 'the toy chest' but the place sasuke went was 'the toy shop.' are they synonymous in the story's world, or was that a typo? (sometimes things happen that one thinks are a mistake when it's actually a point in the plot, so... i never take things like this for granted...)

oh, i can't wait for the next chapter!! this is such an awesome story. good luck with this one and your others!