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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto. I hope everything works out okay for him. Excellent chapter! ~ Jelp
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>.< keep going!
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad you included Asuma. Very few fics do and I like him.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good! Please update soon! ^^
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*in faux english accent a la Oliver Twist* Please mum, I want some more!
Really good, and I like the issues that you're bringing up here. I can't wait to see how this progresses. But be sure to take all the time you need to make sure it's as good as you can get it. Quality is worth the wait!
A.S.
Really good, and I like the issues that you're bringing up here. I can't wait to see how this progresses. But be sure to take all the time you need to make sure it's as good as you can get it. Quality is worth the wait!
A.S.
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
exquitiste story. i love how this is going. i believe the most captivating aspect of the story are the characters and how *real* they feel. their personalities, and troubles are understandable and heartwrenching. i especially enjoyed the sasuke and sakura bit, haha, theyre just like an actual couple. im looking forward to your next update. :-)
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I feel bad for Sasuke-kun. But I have never liked a dominant Naruto more! Please update soon!
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa - man things are not going well for either of the boys :s and Orochimaru made my skin crawl with what he said to Naruto, he really did *shudders* anyway :D cool chp. heh and I'm glad you decided to continue it because it's really interesting, it's a different take on them and you do it well ^_^
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovin it :)
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyaa yay i'm glad you're continuing it!! love your a/n of not condoning sasusaku lol. also loved how you did their sex scene, though, with sasuke thinking about and imagining naruto and getting so into it he forgot himself and who he was really with... omg, it was great, especially the comparisons of what he *should* be hearing to what his imagination made him hear. *sigh* oh sakura, you're such a sheltered lil girl when it comes to sex it seems... (not that sasu was acting that way cuz he loves YOU... cuz he's so not XD) oh well, it'll be your loss girly :p i wonder if she notices anything strange about sasu keeping his bite marks covered yet? (the bit about sasuke turning to pee when she brought him clothes, to further deter her from lingering, was greatness, btw) ..if she's staying at her parents' now she'll prob be gone long enough for them to heal now (if naru doesn't get his hands on sasuke again before then lol) omg, and before that, with sasuke jerking himself off in front of the mirror.. while fingering all the marks naruto left?!! SO FUCKING HOT *_* hot damn
as for naruto's part, the setting descriptions, along with description of oro's place in the underworld, were lovely. and i simply loved the easy-yet-hostile banter between naruto and suigetsu! a bit of karin-bashing by way of suigetsu tickles me pink as well heheh. his hatred for her amuses me to no end. i wonder what naruto's got in mind now and what he'll do next concerning sasuke, the video, oro and ino... whoo i can't wait for your next update!! thanks again for continuing it!!!!!
~ lg
as for naruto's part, the setting descriptions, along with description of oro's place in the underworld, were lovely. and i simply loved the easy-yet-hostile banter between naruto and suigetsu! a bit of karin-bashing by way of suigetsu tickles me pink as well heheh. his hatred for her amuses me to no end. i wonder what naruto's got in mind now and what he'll do next concerning sasuke, the video, oro and ino... whoo i can't wait for your next update!! thanks again for continuing it!!!!!
~ lg