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niiice!

so glad Shika and Choji made an appearance, they were spot on too:)
excellent layout of evidence...you have such a good flow. I'm telling
you this is the only Sasuke I love completely.

I will truely hate to see this end.

OMFG!
I love your writings so much. I needed a story to get into and I found this one and I love it. I love Sounds of Dreams too and you are starting to write that too, Oh happy days are here again.....now what am i going to do in the mean time? Sigh, guess ill look up the other stories that you have. :)

Shosuro

YAY! FINALLY! THEY'RE TOGETHER! :-) Awww, I really loved this story. Thank you so much for writing it! It's been a wonderful, wonderful read. I loved the depth you put into the characters, each of them portrayed with their own strengths as well as their own flaws. Amazing! Beautifully written! Good luck with everything else you have planned! :-) ~ Jelp

This was a another great story. Although, it does leave a couple questions, like does Sasuke and naruto only hook up once a year? But dont worry about an epilogue. I cant wait till you start on Dreams of Fire. I have been waiting for that one. Sound of Dreams is my alltime favorite fic. So get to writing and your fans will make you cookies and clean your house and anything else you need done so you can write faster!!!

hey it was a good story i love your work.:) i cant wait for your next story

I've been reading and stalking this fic for months as I have also been for SoD and DoF... I am sooooo waiting patiently for Dreams of Fire to be posted.

But back to my point: I loved Blackmail and Betrayal! From the plot-line to your Naruto and Sasuke... even your Kakashi is fantastic! I do love a happy ending! ;P

Anissa34

Z! You put a smile on my face because today is Zrinaday! A wonderful ending to a great detective story. And the bonus is you're about to started on “Dreams of Fire”!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 20: Yay, here goes! X3

(*snort*) Heh -- he’s making Shikamaru do the tedious trace-back work instead of the puzzle. I’ll bet that if they opted for the puzzle instead (if they knew it was a puzzle, of course) they would’ve figured something out faster. ^^ (I personally haven’t figured it out, but I don’t wanna wait until I do before reading the chapter. ^^;) . . . . Charming, Chouji, charming. ¬_¬ . . . . Kinda impressive how Chouji can look at this stuff after eating and NOT lose his lunch. That’s professionalism for ya. (*sweat*) . . . . “This man never made it to a hospital.” Okay lemme think here: my guess is that the whole batch of photos is a mixed batch, and that some of them had stuff done to them to make them look like Naruto’s body. That might explain why everything took so long. õ_õ . . . . Hah, I was right. ^_^ . . . . I like that line: “Considering the fact [. . .] the comment amusing.” Me neither. . . . A photocopied enlargement? Maybe that’ll reveal something Sasuke (and I) missed. . . . I like these details about the guns. How do you know all this? . . . . Whoa, I totally forgot about not being able to go near the body! I just reread that part in chapter 18, and wow! You disguised that really well! =D . . . . Oh, so that was Naruto?? Jeez, no wonder it was convincing! O.O . . . . Sasuke’s in his epiphany. ^_^ . . . . Now the puzzle? =D . . . . (!!!) Didn’t Sasuke tell Naruto that he used to play those kinds of games when he was little?? HE DID! O.O And I totally forgot about it! ZRINA, YOU ARE AMAZING!! =DDDD ♥ ♥ ♥ . . . . Now we’re cookin’! =D (Love that sentence: “Being the methodical [. . .] not thinking straight . . .” XD) . . . . OHHHHH, no WONDER I didn’t get it! Clever! =DDD (It’s not exactly what he said, but close enough!) . . . . (*snicker*) “Why encode a [. . .] Surely the idiot wasn’t that dumb?” There’s something funny about that line. XD . . . . Oh, that was clever! NICE! Naruto really thought this out, didn’t he! =DDD . . . . Does Sasuke have a new boss now? . . . . Eheh, cute about the “we all need a break.” ^^
Kakashi, I’ll bet . . . Yup. ^_^ . . . . Yeah, I figured that as soon as Sasuke figured stuff out he’d get mad pretty quickly. ^^; . . . . Sannin Security Systems? I’ve never heard of them. (XD) . . . . I wonder if ‘Rochi-kun ever had any connection with them in the past. . . . Oh, that ending was sweet! (*squeee*) ^_^
Who’s this now? . . . . Naruto? . . . . Yeah, it’s gotta be. (I love how he’s such a computer whiz. ^_^) . . . . Brown hair, green eyes. Interesting. (Is he ever going to be able to go out in public without a disguise again? ó_ò) . . . . Is it -- could it be -- ? . . . . Awwww! ♥ ♥ ♥ (Does Naruto still have the green lens in?) . . . . (*snicker*) I love Sasuke’s description of whenever Naruto leaves his sight. XD . . . . Kind of a bittersweet mood about the scars. I like them, but at the same time it’s sad as to what they represent. . . . Yay, I know what’s coming. ♥__♥ . . . . Nice bit about the gun. . . . Hmm, that would be awkward. ô_o (By the way, has Sasuke shaved yet? God, I hope so.) . . . . Oh boy . . . does this mean Sasuke gets to be on top?? ♥__♥ . . . . (*when reading “Once he received a nod [. . .] stepped inside.”*) Oh! Oh! Wait! Stop! I think I see where this is going! =D Okay, I’m going to be honest with you: At the first hint that they were going to have sex, I was thrilled because I love the sex scenes and it’s sweet and cute and . . . yeah; but the Little Critic in my mind had to put in their 2 cents worth, and it said, “Well, isn’t it just a little bit cheesy?” HowEVER, it looks like it’s going to be SasuNaru action this time around. AND not ONLY that, but ALSO it’s going to be something totally NEW for Naruto! I mean, Kakashi said earlier something about “Naruto knows sex, not love.” He’ll get to experience that love in this way. And the Little Critic in my mind is filling in Star after Star on her ratings sheet for this story, so she’s loving this too! :love::happyhappy::love: (Okay, on with the story.) . . . . Sasuke seems a little nervous. It’s cute. . . . ‘Tsokay, Sasuke, you’re allowed to be paranoid for a while. . . . Interesting. I like it how Sasuke gave him that cold cream advice seriously. (I wonder if Naruto’ll ever take it eventually.) . . . . Heheh, this sort of thing happened in The Sound of Dreams for the first SasuNaru scene: Naruto took over for a bit. ^^ . . . . I like how Sasuke keeps stopping and tries to clarify that he wants Naruto for more than just sex; how it’s so important to him that Naruto knows that. . . . (omg, I was thinking the same line Naruto was thinking. *blush*) . . . . Love their personalities in this whole scene. . . . Colored condoms? Why? (Not complaining, just curious.) . . . . Heheh, love Naruto’s line: “It’s been awhile since I . . . well, you need to . . . here, let me see the lube.” ^^ So cute. . . . I love how Sasuke’s virgin-nervous about this (and in this sense, he is). ^_^ . . . . Love the “Finally, finally” part. . . . (*snort*) “He vaguely hoped he wouldn’t humiliate himself by passing out before it was over.” XD . . . . Aw well, too bad, Sasuke. There’s always next time. ^^ . . . . (Dude, take the condom off.) . . . . Yay! ^_^

Something I’m mildly wondering . . . are they ever going to do it bareback? (*BLUSH*)

Okay, I really enjoyed reading it, but there’s just one thing I can’t help bringing up: (*sigh*) It feels incomplete. What’s going to happen AFTER this? How’s life going to be for them? Are they going to live together? Are they going to stay in LA or move somewhere else? Where? Is Sasuke still going to stay in touch with Sakura? What’s Naruto going to do for a living? Etc., etc. I’m not saying a sequel, but I am saying an Epilogue. There doesn’t even have to be sex in it! I just want to know where things go from where the chapter left off! (Not that I want to delay Dreams of Fire, but I wanna knooooowww!)

Anyways, good story, I enjoyed reading it immensely! =DDD

It was a wonderful read from begining to end!! I absolutely loved it!

Oh God I'm so fucking Excited!!! *huggles* This was a freaking perfect ending XD. And LOL, I opened the 'new' page and the update was right at the top! And the first thing that jumped out of my mouth was "Don't fuck me up. Seriously!" You have made my YEAR!!! You're writing again!!! With a reassuring type of frequency XD, I'm so happy. This chapter was good old fashioned heart-swelling. That kind of feeling you get in your chest that suddenly feels too small to accommodate your organs and it sort of burns in a really satisfying way that makes you need to rub it. And I just can't stop smiling! It's finished! And before I even had time to be properly sad, you spring promises of 'Dreams of Fire' on me!! I'm so freaking Excited!! I now totally have to go and reread SOD. *starry eyes* Do you know how happy that makes me!?! LOL, I've been saving it up! Like that favourite book you own that you just need to leave for a minute, so you can come back to it anew. And I can read it straight through from start to finish O.O!! *swallows* I'm not gonna be able to move while reading that. I'll be holed up in my room for days. God I have to start drawing again! Geez, I've completely gone off on a tangent. *shakes head*, I love you! I'm so very happy to see you're writing again. I have missed you and your talents so horribly *sighs and snuggles*. Thank you so very much for the update honey. I wish you loads of inspiration and free time!! XD *MUAH*