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thats funny, he thought of her as the guy (naruto) who screwed him and ended up calling her a slut witch wouldnt mean anything if it were that guy probably woulda made him hornyer.please continue i like this.
updates?

Oh my god! That was just so amazingly fantastic! Yes, me too i don't condone SasuSaku but for the developement of the story I accepted it :P Anyways I feel so bad for Naruto and Ino And I REALLY hope that when you made Naruto say ' it was that easy'...I REALLY REALLY hope you are going to make him betray Orochimaru and notSasuke. ACK! The suspense is killing me!!! This is a fantastic story and with only two chapters it is already one of my favorites! PLease update soon and keep up the excellent writing job!

Hmm...it'd be interesting if Sakura ended up knowing Naruto and Ino when they were little. Naruto goes to find Sasuke to make him get Ino away from Orochimaru, and instead, Sakura recognizes Naruto, and they start talking. Thus, an utterly jealous Sasuke! Or not...I love your stories, and I love all the possibilities that you create that make me keep on guessing. Another great chapter! Keep up the excellent work. ~ Jelp

lol your eyes might light up when you get a review, but it's just me giving you the same one so it's an official one XD

Ok review as I read once again XD

I love all the descriptions at the beginning, some readers may not appreciate it, but it really sets the scene for me

I vaguely know who Karin and others are from the manga because I don’t read it, but some spoilers are just there so can’t really comment on their ICness. The conversation between the S guy and Naruto made me smirk though, “loose ass” made me laugh at the visual image of it XD

Oooh I like what you’ve done with Ino, lol you know it only just hit me that she’s Naruto’s cousin because of the whole blonde hair, blue eyes thing *idiot*

Hints of OroNaru, oh that’s worse than Uchihacest!

I see the situation you’ve put Naruto in, it’s pretty difficult for the poor boy, since he’s a hero at heart!! Aw you write Naruto angsting really well, especially since he’s agnsting for someone else and not himself, Naruto wouldn’t angst about him self *babbling*

SASUKE JERKING OFF IN FRONT OF A MIRROR! Where do you come up with this stuff? O_O seriously.

Mm Sasuke’s already hooked on Naruto, you can’t deny it Sasuke, hand your ass to Naruto, by right, it belongs to him.

I love that Sasuke is imaging Naruto while smexing Sakura. It’s practically canon!

“That’s it, little slut, take my cock!” Oh he’s gonna get beaten… O_O

I liked the argument between them too, it sounds pretty much how a relationship between the two would go. *nods* I’m actually quite proud of Sakura, even though she’s in love for Sasuke, she knew what she wanted and she stood by it. So exit Sakura enter Naruto? *looks imploringly at Zrina* *sigh* yes I know, silly Adi for jumping to the smut, the smut will come later, plot comes first XD

*hugs you to death* (ok not completely to death, we need Zrina alive to lead the NaruSasu revolution XD) I honestly am over the moon you decided to continue this, and I firmly believe it’s because I begged and not because of the other 40 reviewers *wishful thinking*

*loves on you*

Adi XX

ALSO I was thinking about this story, and this is just me wondering what kinda plot would unfold, would Naruto try to blackmail Sasuke, and then they some how hatch out a plan to blackmail Orochimaru, and then it backfires because Naruto betrays Sasuke for some reason because Orochimaru binds him to him some other way?

Oh I don't know I'm just very tired from work :( and I'm hungry and bah! *goes off to sulk*

lol I LOVE YOU!

That was simply amazing and the story held me spellbound from start to finish. Aww poor Sasuke is unsatisfied and that will ulitmately leave to his ruin unless Naru-chan has something up his sleeve. I can't to see what happens next. And is like Ino on drugs or something? I mean I heard of people being dependent on others but this seems far beyond the call od dependency. It's like she's high... why else wouldn't she know her cousin was in that room worried about her. She's like a vegatable. But I guess I'll have to wait and see what happens next.

Well that was a great chapter despite the SasuSaku sex in it. Poor Sasuke has it bad for Naruto! I can't wait till they meet again!! :)

Oh, I like this. I've read some detective fanfiction before, usually all having the exact same plot. But yours is so much more original. It's well written, well thought out, and still in character. To think I have to wait for two weeks before I get another chapter...oh the agony. But I think I'll survive somehow, as long as you DO update. Anyway, keep up the good work. You're a pretty damned good writer.

oh that was so good!! i think this story is going to be another masterpiece on your part. i'm so excited about it! and when naruto thought that it could be just that easy to blackmail, betray, and gain freedom, i was so hoping that he had the idea to either blackmail orochimaru, or blackmail sasuke into helping him rather than doing it for orochimaru. i know this is going to be super sweet. and i know it might just be the sasuke-naruto fangirl in me, but i seriously hope that sasuke drops sakura soon. just get it over with. DROP HER.

anyway, i look forward to the next chapter! good luck!

Yay! you are gonna continue it. haha sasuke! love it keep going!

Damn, Wow - YAY!! I'm so excited!! This is really really Good. As usual you exceed my expectations XD. I like how you structured the base and that part of Naruto's life. And as usual Orochimaru is fabulously Horrible. I feel really bad for Ino, but damn, please don't let Oro get his hands on Naruto O.o ick ick, eeeww, bad images :S must. cleanse. brain. Sasuke bathroom scene. Sasuke all hickeyed up and remembering the feeling of being fucked, oooh :drool, nosebleed: That did it. That was so fucking HOTT, omg, hell even the sex with Sakura was strangely satisfying XD. Maybe cause he was picturing my fav blond :D That was awesome by the way, LOL. I'm also really glad Sakura fought him - Good on her, you made her a stand up chick. That's not something I usually associate with Sakura, at least when it comes to Sasuke. I have to disagree with her though - doomed to have vanilla missionary sex forever. I think, I'd die. Of boredom O.o. Are there really girls like that out there? I have to ask because I don't know any. I've met some that come close, but even they have a little wild in them, at least enough to change position! LOL, poor Sasuke - RUN, Baby! The hills are that-a-way -----> [ Mount Naruto ] pun fully intended XD. LOL, now comes the hard part - I have to be patient :(. LOL it's cool I can handle it. Thanks so much for the update Love, huggles and luffles, Ja, Allys.