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Coool. what a great start to what could be a really good fiction. I love fiction's where sasuke and naruto see each other on the side. nobody can get between these boys. Looking forward to next chappie

Okay, I like that. I like that a lot. If/when you have the time/incentive to continue it, please, /please/ do! That was really good and you left it on a damned interesting note.

huwhaat?!
one-shot?!
noooooooo~!
please, please.. a sequel!
it's so good, ii deserves one!
^_^

Oh wow!! You're friggin' amazing!! ^_^ I wana run up and hug the life out of you! There are so many yet so few of great great NarutoxSasuke fics out there....and I've been wanting to find another awesome story to read and have it worthy of waiting for!! ^_^ HERE IT IS!! YAY!! I only have 4 right now, counting this and SoD..! Thanks so much for sharing this, we're all excited for the next update!!

I must say this was good. I am not sure if you sould continue, its hard to say. I personaly would like you to continue in respect to seeing an out come of what happens to sasuke and naruto. It would be cool to see you find a way to get them together. So if you continue good luck and I wish you the best.

NANIIII, Naruto what???! You definitely can't leave it on its own now that you threw some plot in there at the end! That was really good and interesting. And of course the smut was hot too!

Now to read chaps 54 & 55 of SoD! :D

*looks at Zrina squinty eyed* you're some sort of genius aren't you? You're like the genius of NaruSasu smut. *nods* I'm on to you!

Ok I'm back, just like I promised XD I don't know how much of a review you'll get out of me because rereading that I'm still a puddle of fangirl goo, but never fear! I shall try!!

I LOVE that Sasuke was a tall uke, I don't think I've ever read a fic with a taller uke :D You made Naruto so so so so SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO smexy. Sasuke was so IC as well, I loved your descriptions of everything, the bar, the chairs, the room, your attention to detail is amazing, you give just enough to let the reader see your world, but not too much that we all fall asleep XD

And you used condoms! WAY TO PRACTISE SAFE SEX! :D

I'm going to reiterate what all the other 30 something reviews above me have said, YOU MUST NOT LEAVE THIS AS A ONE SHOT.

I haven't found any cop dramas that I like, and yours has plot written all over it! So you must continue, pretty please?

I liked that Naruto doesn't feel too guilty because he figures Sasuke's just an ass cheating on his fiance, O_O SAKURA! If you do carry on I can't wait to see what you do with her! :D

My absolute favourite part was when Sasuke left wanting Naruto to follow him. So typical of him XD

*loves on you* you make me and so many others very happy fangirls, you're like the saint of the NaruSasu fandom XD

oh hell no you better not leave this at a one shot...more more more

please don't leave this as a one shot!
it's good so far and personally, i wanna see what sakura does when she finds out her precious sasuke-kun was out playing uke!!!
ohhhh the reaction!!!! ~smiles in a happy-evil way~
that and you've already got some back story at the end there so it would be a shame to not use it!
but it is up to you!
luck!

wow.. that was different. this is a very original AU story. I hope you take it further if you figure out where you'd want it to go. If not, then it was one hell of a oneshot! ^^