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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I hope you continue it! The lemon was so hot!!!! :)
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm... that was quite good, very enjoyable really, i prefer my naru/sasu with a little bit of "taking advantage", which that did wonderfully. i feel like i /could/ work on it's own, as a oneshot, but it could also go on, there are lots and lots of loose ends there, things to tie up, but none of them are /vital/
i'd vote for more, it's a good story ^.^
i'd vote for more, it's a good story ^.^
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No you cant stop I want to know how they get out of this.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know damn well you can't leave this as a one shot! I won't have it!
That was wonderful and so vivid and realistic. I swear. OMG that was good. Just picturing Naruto dressed like that...GOD. I actually kind of thought about the Yondy dressed like that as well (don't know why hahaha) Poor Sasuke though. Engagaed to pinky and she won't even give him a blowjob. Stupid girl. Continue? I'll love you even more than what I do now!
That was wonderful and so vivid and realistic. I swear. OMG that was good. Just picturing Naruto dressed like that...GOD. I actually kind of thought about the Yondy dressed like that as well (don't know why hahaha) Poor Sasuke though. Engagaed to pinky and she won't even give him a blowjob. Stupid girl. Continue? I'll love you even more than what I do now!
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! it's great as a oneshot... but... please continue it if you can. of course, i wouldn't want it to be all angsty and whatnot. maybe as naruto's editing the tape, he thinks that maybe he can get sasuke to help him save ino instead of ruining the uchiha. ah! i'm angsting about it already, and you don't even know what you're going to do with the story!
but it was very, very good! thank you for sharing!
but it was very, very good! thank you for sharing!
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! :D
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
asjskdj YES PLEASE TO BE CONTINUING. That was hot. Your fic is wonderful, always is. I live for Sound of Dreams updates, honestly. I would love to see you continuing with this AU, there's so much just bubbling under the surface there! <333 Loveloveincoherantlove (first time reviewing anything because I lose)
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I think you should continue it. Make it five to ten chapters. Nothing too elaborate, but enough so that Sasuke and Naruto can get together. :-) ~ Jelp
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, love. It's really good so far, really sad though. The smut as usual was excellent and the hinted at story line has a lot of possibilities. I can't tell you what to do with it, but I can tell you that if you do decide to continue, I'll be here all the way. I've been dying for a Good cop drama. I've seen a lot of attempts but haven't found one I really liked. Thanks for writing, I always adore your stories XD.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it :D I'd gladly read more of this story if it's not too much for you to write SoD and this one at the same time. It seems everything you write is made of greatness.