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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue. Great job, I love your orginial idea. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, zrina, you CAN'T leave it as a oneshot!! it was SO hot and such a great and perfect setup for MUCH MORE, you just can't leave it here!! gahh, i wonder what oro would be blackmailing sasuke for in payment, and why--just cuz he can, or is there something more going on? does sakura have any clue, and what about all the biting sasu let naru do? is he all marked up now? oooh when sasuke finds out it was all just to blackmail him, if he's got marks to physically remind him it could compound his regrets and confusion... you just have so much potential for drama and more future smut here, you can't leave us hanging!!! ppplllleeeeaaassseeee *pooly eyes*
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, Sasuke's betraying his fiance is he? *sigh* yare yare - but hey :d smex was HOT!!! (as if you didn't know already) but yeah, it was interesting I think and you're unsure whether to continue it or not? well heh if you do XD I'd really really want to read it but hey no pressure here :) but you just left it in a situation where I want to know what the hell is going to happen after this, especially with the mixed feelings Sasuke left wth anyway, it was good ^_6
Hina xXxx
p.s. you make Naruto so damn hot I drool lol
Hina xXxx
p.s. you make Naruto so damn hot I drool lol
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LEAVE IT AS A ONE SHOT?!?!!?!?!?!?!? You're asking to get shot! XD
Aw Zrina, babe, you have to continue *thrusts sasuke plush doll at you* You my dear are worth my most precious item! XD Take it! Use it to inspire yourself :D
The plot would be good, I can just see it, oh the angst, the drama, the SMUT! *goes off into lalala smut land*
huh what were we talking about?
XD
I'm gonna go reread that, and I'll leave you a proper review in the morning ;D
Adi XX
Aw Zrina, babe, you have to continue *thrusts sasuke plush doll at you* You my dear are worth my most precious item! XD Take it! Use it to inspire yourself :D
The plot would be good, I can just see it, oh the angst, the drama, the SMUT! *goes off into lalala smut land*
huh what were we talking about?
XD
I'm gonna go reread that, and I'll leave you a proper review in the morning ;D
Adi XX
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know this story would make an awesome one-shot, but then I think I'd might regret it later on. So, please make this a multi-chapter.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Don't leave it like this! :O We want more!!! this was freaking good xD
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.o Omg Zrina...How do you do it? Your so damn talented and you make the stories characters come to life so...so..Wow damn I can't even put it into words!!! But I must beg, beg you to pleaaaaaaasssseeee!! Consider continuing this story!!! I love it so far! The first chapter...damn I think I'm going to be blushing for awhile and thats in a good way!! LOL. I hope you understand what I'm trying to say and don't think me weird or anything. I love your stories!! YOU FRIGGING ROCK!! You must, must continue this cause I can see so many ways you can take this!! If you do update this story...I'll...I'll...grrr I don't know! I'll bow to your greatness or I'll be you dom or sub for all eternity!! PLEASEEEEEEEEE UPDATE!! GAH! I can't wait! LOVE YA! Ttul!
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How are you going to have SAsuke find out about the blackmail? Will he and Naruto fall for each other?
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue with this story. I like it and I would like to see more of it. Je!
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is so great! -blink- I saw that you were writing another fic (I really love Sounds of Dreams) so I said, 'What the heck' and BAM! I'm addicted!
-shudders- this is such a great plot! I really hope you don't make this a one shot =^^= Its really really really good!
-shudders- this is such a great plot! I really hope you don't make this a one shot =^^= Its really really really good!