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for Blackmail and Betrayal

by Zrina

schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah. Waaaay too good of a story and plot for a one-shot. Update!
person beautifullove348
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was majorly hot! Thanks for the lemon, and btw SoD is an extremely amazing story one of my top favs. A sequel to this lemon would definitely be appreciated:)
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome!
I'd love to read more!
person Bluesake
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome...that's all I have to say. Very nice you should continue it!
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist there at the end, I wasn't expecting that at all but it was good. Poor little Naruto though, having to do all those things for that snake bastard. Lol. Seriously though it's a nice piece and you should continue it, though i kinda sense Naruto will be getting hurt a lot, physically and emotionally, but we all love to torture our favorite characters don't we.