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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi!It's a great fic!A great ending!I really loved reading it and I will definitly look for some ohter fics from you!Thank you!I honestly enjoyed!
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DEAR LORD
and
OMG
this story's amazing, hun~!
and it almost done (or atleast, it seems as though it's almost done)
and I am in total suspence for what's going to happen next!
please update soon~!
'til then hun ^o^
and
OMG
this story's amazing, hun~!
and it almost done (or atleast, it seems as though it's almost done)
and I am in total suspence for what's going to happen next!
please update soon~!
'til then hun ^o^
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. you certainly have a way with suspense!!! wow....thats all i can say
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh OH OH ............ i think i got an idea its naruto in las vegas and the person that died is just an imitation......never mind thats probable wrong....but anyway really good kinda sad cause sasukes all drink and work serious but good can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! More please! *holds hand out like little orphan Oliver* You've got me so hooked. You have done SUCH an AMAZING job with Sasuke's unraveling psyche. I love how well you do cop stories too. Where did you learn this? You read a lot of these types of novels? You're like a REAL author. Publishable even. It's wonderful. I love your stuff so very much.
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
did u kill off naruto? cause if thats seriously what happened i don't see any point to continue reading this, seems the story ends
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke, you brilliant genius you, look at the details to get the larger picture!! :-) I liked this chapter. Seeing Sasuke so vulnerable is very refreshing in that it's very in-character of his personality in the anime and manga. People tend to shy away from portraying Sasuke as someone who would let his life fall around him if things weren't going well.
Excellent work! Looking forward to the next update. :-) ~ Jelp
Excellent work! Looking forward to the next update. :-) ~ Jelp
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well i'm relieved big time, after finishing chapter 18 and going on to chapter 19 i'm no longer about to cry
i'm glad naruto is most likely alive and its cool that u've added shikamaru and choji
though one thing is bothering me, what happened to itachi, u said that the bodies of sasuke's parents were found but only itachis bloody clothes were found somewhere else and he was missing, so i think he's gonna be coming around sometime
just a thought , well please update as soon as u can, i spent the whole day reading this whole fanfiction but it was worth it
i'm glad naruto is most likely alive and its cool that u've added shikamaru and choji
though one thing is bothering me, what happened to itachi, u said that the bodies of sasuke's parents were found but only itachis bloody clothes were found somewhere else and he was missing, so i think he's gonna be coming around sometime
just a thought , well please update as soon as u can, i spent the whole day reading this whole fanfiction but it was worth it
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! I really looking forward to the conclusion... I have my suspicions, but I'll wait to see!
Thanks for writing!
Thanks for writing!
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have the insane urge to beat the crap out of him.. WHY is he so dense!!!!!!!!!!!! I really dont get it. But thank you so much for updating!!!!!!!