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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* They have been separated for so long :( Sasuke sees Sakura more than Naruto, ugh. C'mon Sasuke THINK! Go get ya blonde.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Z! Miss you! I needed this fix from you:) I'm glad that I'll be able to read what happens in Vegas. Usually what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas! ^_^
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um, did I read that right from the postcard? "Can I Keep You"? That would be soooo sweet! Awww. And if I'm reading too much into it, oh well, wouldn't be the first time.
Anyways - Yay! I was so looking forward to an update. It's so hard seeing them separated, is Sasuke going to finally get to Vegas next chapter, or will he just be figuring it out. Whatever, looking forward to more, as always.
Anyways - Yay! I was so looking forward to an update. It's so hard seeing them separated, is Sasuke going to finally get to Vegas next chapter, or will he just be figuring it out. Whatever, looking forward to more, as always.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh1 Oh1 He's not really dead is he? The postcards are from Naruto! Right? Right?!?!
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ksdf;aksdj;laksdghaf you and your @#($& cliffhangers! *throws peaches at*
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No offense, but the fake death is overdone... it's a great story and all, but I was disappointed...
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19: (*sigh*) Hopefully things’ll work out. T_T. . . . I hope I enjoy too. >.< . . .
Sasuke’s probably trying to kill himself, drinking like that. ó_ò . . . . Love the line about his hair. It does get crazy when it gets long. . . . Jeezus, he’s got a gun? Õ_Õ What the hell? . . . . Man, that was intense, Kakashi’s entrance. o_o . . . . (*snort*) I can’t believe Kakashi said that. 9_9; . . . . “Sacred.” Consecration. =) . . . . Wow, he’s really distant. “ ‘Oh. Lost another partner,’ he answered absently.” Sounds like the walking dead. õ_o . . . . Kakashi, if Naruto is indeed alive (I don’t see how, but just supposing) and is currently in Las Vegas, you might want to drop some more hints for Sasuke, because he’s just not getting it. . . . Love Sasuke’s adamancy. That’s totally him. :heart: . . . . Watch it, Goddammit, Sasuke. (*hiss*) . . . . Love this line: “You’re obviously close to this case and it’s muddled your thinking.” :heart: . . . . And I love how Kakashi then says, “Shut up. I’m not done yet,” before Sasuke says anything. I can totally hear him saying that. =D . . . . Really good lecture on how it works to be a professional detective. =D . . . . Yeah, if anything, the booze might just make things harder for him to think straight. . . . Interesting line on how Sasuke feels about disappointing Kakashi. It’s kind of a funny thought, being lectured by a porn shop owner of all things. ^^ . . . . Excellent job, Kakashi. You opened his eyes, so he wasn’t running around blind. ^_^ . . . . Or maybe not. =\ . . . . (!) You smelled something, Sasuke. õ_õ . . . . Love these details. I’m not totally sure about what’s going on, but that’s okay, I like it. =D . . . . Sasuke, if you really want revenge, you’re going to have to face it. . . . Focus, Sasuke, focus. You’re a ninja in one world, a detective in this world, you can do this. . . . This detective-at-work scene is absolutely amazing. I’m impressed. =D . . . . Love his willpower against the drink. . . . Okay, that time I can understand it, Sasuke. You might need one for this. I just hope you can still think straight. . . . Is there a secret in the tattoo, I wonder? Sasuke, either way, you’re probably going to have to take a really close look at the more personal pictures. The ones that show Naruto’s face and tattoo and all that. Cuz that’s probably where you’ll find something weird (if something’s weird, and God, I hope it is). . . . Sasuke, you dumb shit, WAKE UP!! ò_ó
Sasuke needing to shave. I’ve been reading another fanfic that mentioned that just the other day, and I still have to get used to the idea. It’s . . . kind of strange. =\ . . . . I like how you broke up the sentences in the postcard. I wonder if that’s because of the limited amount of space in a postcard, or is there some kind of hint. Either way, the placement of the breaks is awesome. =DD . . . . “Drop a letter” . . . a capital letter at the beginning? õ_o . . . . (*snicker*) I absolutely adore how you brought Shikamaru into this. ^^ (Though I have a tough time imagining him as a forensic expert. *sweat*) . . . . Ah, there’s that word “blackmail” again. . . . Eww, that’s gross. x_x . . . . Hang on . . . this is where Sasuke’s going to notice some odd stuff, isn’t he? . . . . Yup, he’s smelling something again. . . . SsssssHIT! Don’t do that, Sasuke! ò_ó . . . . I wonder who that girl at the casino was. A character from the manga, or just an OC?
*SQUEEEEEEE!!!* XDDDDD
Sasuke’s probably trying to kill himself, drinking like that. ó_ò . . . . Love the line about his hair. It does get crazy when it gets long. . . . Jeezus, he’s got a gun? Õ_Õ What the hell? . . . . Man, that was intense, Kakashi’s entrance. o_o . . . . (*snort*) I can’t believe Kakashi said that. 9_9; . . . . “Sacred.” Consecration. =) . . . . Wow, he’s really distant. “ ‘Oh. Lost another partner,’ he answered absently.” Sounds like the walking dead. õ_o . . . . Kakashi, if Naruto is indeed alive (I don’t see how, but just supposing) and is currently in Las Vegas, you might want to drop some more hints for Sasuke, because he’s just not getting it. . . . Love Sasuke’s adamancy. That’s totally him. :heart: . . . . Watch it, Goddammit, Sasuke. (*hiss*) . . . . Love this line: “You’re obviously close to this case and it’s muddled your thinking.” :heart: . . . . And I love how Kakashi then says, “Shut up. I’m not done yet,” before Sasuke says anything. I can totally hear him saying that. =D . . . . Really good lecture on how it works to be a professional detective. =D . . . . Yeah, if anything, the booze might just make things harder for him to think straight. . . . Interesting line on how Sasuke feels about disappointing Kakashi. It’s kind of a funny thought, being lectured by a porn shop owner of all things. ^^ . . . . Excellent job, Kakashi. You opened his eyes, so he wasn’t running around blind. ^_^ . . . . Or maybe not. =\ . . . . (!) You smelled something, Sasuke. õ_õ . . . . Love these details. I’m not totally sure about what’s going on, but that’s okay, I like it. =D . . . . Sasuke, if you really want revenge, you’re going to have to face it. . . . Focus, Sasuke, focus. You’re a ninja in one world, a detective in this world, you can do this. . . . This detective-at-work scene is absolutely amazing. I’m impressed. =D . . . . Love his willpower against the drink. . . . Okay, that time I can understand it, Sasuke. You might need one for this. I just hope you can still think straight. . . . Is there a secret in the tattoo, I wonder? Sasuke, either way, you’re probably going to have to take a really close look at the more personal pictures. The ones that show Naruto’s face and tattoo and all that. Cuz that’s probably where you’ll find something weird (if something’s weird, and God, I hope it is). . . . Sasuke, you dumb shit, WAKE UP!! ò_ó
Sasuke needing to shave. I’ve been reading another fanfic that mentioned that just the other day, and I still have to get used to the idea. It’s . . . kind of strange. =\ . . . . I like how you broke up the sentences in the postcard. I wonder if that’s because of the limited amount of space in a postcard, or is there some kind of hint. Either way, the placement of the breaks is awesome. =DD . . . . “Drop a letter” . . . a capital letter at the beginning? õ_o . . . . (*snicker*) I absolutely adore how you brought Shikamaru into this. ^^ (Though I have a tough time imagining him as a forensic expert. *sweat*) . . . . Ah, there’s that word “blackmail” again. . . . Eww, that’s gross. x_x . . . . Hang on . . . this is where Sasuke’s going to notice some odd stuff, isn’t he? . . . . Yup, he’s smelling something again. . . . SsssssHIT! Don’t do that, Sasuke! ò_ó . . . . I wonder who that girl at the casino was. A character from the manga, or just an OC?
*SQUEEEEEEE!!!* XDDDDD
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan.... oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man ohmanohmanohmanohmanohmanohman!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU. MUST. MUST. UPDATE. A.S.A.P. ahh poor sasuke!maaaaaan that HAS to be naruto in vegas... PLEASE LET IT BE HIM. HAS TO BE. HAAAaaaaaS TO BEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!
i love you and this story. and you cause be to type like a madwoman. sigh.
i love you and this story. and you cause be to type like a madwoman. sigh.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Theory: Naruto's not dead. His death was staged so that Orochimaru would stop trying to kill him. Naruto is sending the postcards, so clearly, he is in Vegas for his own protection. Kakashi knows this because he keep pestering Sasuke to look at the postcards.
Good chapter. Keep it up!
Update!
Good chapter. Keep it up!
Update!
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well now we're getting somewhere, now we just sit back and wait for Sasuke to put all the pieces together.
HELLO SASUKE *nocking on his head* IS ANY ONE IN THERE? ^_^
Love the update. can't wait for the reunion.
Love always Robyn
HELLO SASUKE *nocking on his head* IS ANY ONE IN THERE? ^_^
Love the update. can't wait for the reunion.
Love always Robyn