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for Blackmail and Betrayal

by Zrina

schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!! I took a look again at the postcard and it really does say CAN I KEEP YOU
ha ha ha drop a letter ha ha ha
LOVE YOU
Updat soon please

Love always Robyn
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke is being stupid!! All this time he's wasted when Naruto is in Vegas, waiting for him!!! :D Thanks for the new chapter! :)
person Allys
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is sooo SLOW!!! LOL, Doesn't he know he's in a fanfic that's gonna have a big hopefully happy final twist!??!! He needs to get the memo dammit! XD. *huggles u*. I feel really bad for him though. He's so down :(, *sighs*. I can see how that would impair his good judgment. Poor Kakashi is probably dying to just yell at him to stop fucking moping and get his ass on a plane to god damn Vegas!! LOL. I hear the desert's nice this time of year *nods*. You're unbelievably awesome!! Another update!! *dances tiredly but happily*. :). I'm so freaking thrilled that you're writing again, was going into Zrina withdrawal!! I can't wait till Sasuke figures it out XD, :* ♥
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude, it says can i keep you?!!!!!!!!!!! that is so slick. i wanna read more *is already suffering from withdrawal* this fic is so fricking awesome!!!!! i'm calling my friend right now to discuss this or if she hasn't read it yet to make her do so. looking foward to the next update.

~a very excited Devious

person Makkura Arashi
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey long time no see, there's no way yopu've actually killed off naruto is there? I hope not!!
person Ramen_Lover_Forever
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh...man......now why'ed you go and kill naruto...thats not very nice.........*sniffle* now hos going ot be sasuke's fuck buddy...but wait he loved him......or somehting......i really love this story!!!! ^_^ *insert fan girl scream here* but it sadened me that naruto died......but i still love this story....can't wait for more! ^_~
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, I love you, but NOT COOL! ARGHHHH! *dies* Anyway, the way you described Sasuke's shock was awesome, and I loved how unraveled and confusing everything was. I still want to maul you. Just a little.
person Lila
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the hell i'm gone for five minutes and Uzumaki get KILLED!?!?!?....I really hope it was the FBI trying to make Naruto's life easier by faking his death and Kakashi's hint to go to vegas was a subtle hint to his where abouts...And Also Ebisu Telling Sasuke to not do anything to get himself killed was his way of saying stay alive a little longer because all will be revealed in time....Please don't let this end like Romeo and Juliet the newer version with poison being taken and guns being used!!!!.....Anyway thanks for the update also Cannot wait for the next chapter ^_^
person hisoka
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
some significance in that letter from vegas ne, so is naruto really dead cuz thad be depressing to no end. i actually imagined sasuke standing with a gun to his head smiling and crying before he shoots his brains out dying with a smile,peace.so narutos in vegas, not the most glamarous place but i've lived there and hate it to no end sometimes but whatever tickles your pickle. hope you can update soon and if not oh well at least we're patiant(some).looking forward to it!yay for patiance!
person xnamikazex
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are making me lose my flame virginity. Never once have I ever truly insulted a story! The connection you made with Naruto and Sasuke in this story was just BEAUTIFUL, perfect. These past chapters, we got nothing, no connection, unless you want to count that little stunt in the bathroom before they were forcibly ripped from each other. Next chapter, you kill Naruto?!?!? And it was so fast! I mean, every death fic I read I am truly in denial until the story is over, and I am in denial right now, but something tells me that you truly mean that he is dead. That is not how I foresaw this story. I mean, sure, you are supposed to maybe leave me somewhat surprised, but not like this! You should have put a little warning that you were planning on killing someone before you shoot me down like that....sigh.