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for Blackmail and Betrayal

by Zrina

person JONQUIL
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know you didn't kill naruto. I don't believe it, I refuse to believe you killed him. I love your stories by the way.
person roro237
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's always nice to read a chapter of yours ^_^
person Nasa
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know your fans are going to KILL you...
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No. Just no.

He.Is.Not.Dead

I think I've just had a heart attack. So bitterly sweet that cliffie was. I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter.

Please please update soon!
person qwerty
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's not dead. I refuse to believe it. He can't have gone through all that crap just to have died. You probably have him in Vegas or wherever, hiding so that someone doesn't actually kill him.
I hope this story ends up happy.
Great chapter.
update
person OMGWTFAWFBKSDJB
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU KILLED NARUTO!?!?!?!??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i cannot believe it. for real?? really??? or is it a faked death. then again sasuke freaking saw naruto in the casket.

youre so cruel!!! ;_;
person Kimra
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D I like you. So I'm going on the premise that Naruto's not actually dead... because honestly if he was the story would kind of be over... I hope. :P Enjoyed reading it. Made me cry (you can be so evil), and can't wait to read more! :D

Cheers!
person Jelp
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is just a decoy...right? Naruto's not really dead, right? He'll be in Vegas or something...right? T-T He can't be dead. It is not acceptable. It's just not acceptable. And Sasuke really better not do something stupid. I'd be less surprised to see him get killed than Naruto...'cuz Naruto is still alive. ::holds firmly and desperately to hope::

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I NEED ANSWERS! I NEED TO KNOW! I N--::SMACK:: ...Okay...I'm okay. I'm settled down now.

I love this story! :-) ~ Jelp
person Nikana
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He's not dead, isin't he? He's just in Las Vegas, right? It was all a set up, and thats not a question. Are you really that cruel or once again you are just proving that you are a proffesional in disguise and pulling our legs saying you are a fanfic writer?
Now seriously...I got my pants in a twist and all thanks to this AWSOME and angsty chapter,Zrina you are a goddess but a wicked one, am dying here waiting for the next update, just hoping that Mr. Sunshine is still very much alive and laughing his arse off in wherever you may place him...Or not
much love super-mega-maxi-girl
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naruto has to be alive!! I think the FBI have made it look like he's dead in order to keep Naruto safe from another attempt on his life. But why won't they let Sasuke know? Thanks for the new chapter! :)