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Excellent! I'm not sure I've had sex with any man that can get me as hot and botherred as the ides of your Itachi, sex-God extraordinaire!!!

dude, ch 14 is well written. good smex. i hope the final fight is just as good

A/N: ::lights the proverbial post-coital cigarette:: Was it good for you?
Fucking awesome I can so see you doing that although I don't know how you look I can see in my head a kick-ass chick saying that with a seductive/dark voice and a cigarette in her mouth after that sexy ass lemon! That was soooo hot great job on your first I recently wrote my first one as well you beat me at it *pouts in a corner* Oh well I just have to try harder to get everyone's libidos running like I'm sure you did on then chappie. It was too cute can't wait for the reactions of the roomies especially Deidara thats going to be nice cos they weren't exactly quiet and it was in the middle of the night! lol hmm oh and YAY! more updates now freakin Nice I love this story. I planning on doing a challenge on Sak/Ita something no one has attempted thus far do you think you'll take up the challenge I won't tell you what it is yet don't know all the details it's in my head I would write it but I think I'd put the idea to shame and you would be able to start and end it on your own time of course another reason I don't want to do it myself I'm awful at updating I barely have time to read let alone write so tell me whatcha think please email me sexgoddess2110@hotmail.com. Great job can't wait for next week

This is your first lemon? Are you kidding me? I seriously had to check my underwear after that little number! It was so...intense, I felt as though I were there (As Sakura, because although it is tempting, I don't think voyeurism would fit with this one) and I were in Itachi's arms myself. Awesome stuff!

Also, I forgot to mention that this story has opened my eyes in a way as well. I kept thinking 'bad guy' 'good guy' all the time, now there are just shades of gay, there is no wholly bad or wholly good person anymore. Good stuff, and I beg of you, finish the next chapter soon! I soak this stuff up like a biscuit!

*hands over plate of cyber chocolate chip cookies* Hats off to ya!


Kiyasume

Wow. This was the first word that came into my mind after reading some chapters, and now, with this new chapter, I really don't know what to think anymore. THIS IS SOOOOOO GOOOD!!!!! Your style and imagination is competing with the author of the manga, hope you know that ^^ Even if your story differs from some things, you can not help but think that this is how the original story could (or should *g*) go on. Wonderful. Amazing.
But now I've read that the end isn't so far away anymore--- which kind of makes me very sad. Are you planning to write some more stories? Maybe this would help to damn the occassional desire of wanting more chapters of perception. Even if the ones until now are unique enough to re-read again and again.

So, I'll say it one more time: You're a wonderful author and your writing style is amazing!!!! Hope you won't stop ever with this writing stuff.

Best wishes and a lot of ideas.

Bye

PS: I hope I haven't written anything stupid in here--- I'm from Germany, so please forgive me if something hasn't come out as it should... but be sure: everything was and is meant in a positive way^^

I think you're close to being my favorite person. ever.
I...can't form the words of praise that you deserve. just know I'll be reading. o_o

Beautiful baby.

Very nice! Now let's get to the good stuff! You've done so well with this story- it's one of the best I have read on this site. Keep up the good work!

dude, this is a very well written story. very thick with plot. up to ch 5 , youve stuck with sakura for a little to long but i can feel it evolving. i think she might be developing stockholm syndrom, you know, where you develop feelings for your captor. but dude, this awsome

good back story for why itachi killed his clan in ch 10, very smart