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dude please finish this story. and seriously, you got close, but there needs to be some sex. maybe sakura and either of the uchiha brothers

Meanie that was mean but I know the chappie next week will make up for it. I loved the Snowball fight it was brilliant besides the sad underlying of angst I really liked this chappie the angst was perfectly portrayed on all the characters thoughts but it's still sad,kinda like a downer but the snowball fight made me happy again and the passion between our fav pair is great too. I swear your the best writer for my fav couple yet and what's amazing you could make me like couples I never thought of reading such as Deidara/Sakura never thought it'd be hot but I think you could do it for sure and make it just as great as this story kakashi too I was amazed when this first began that even though you said it'd be ita/sak it felt like it could go either way and I wouldn't have been mad at you basically from all my ramblings your the most Awesomeness Author yet keep it up! see you next week

Loves Arry

ANOTHER WEEK! >_< I CANT WAIT THAT LONG FOR ITACHI SMEXYNESSS!!!!!!!! NO COOKIES FOR YOU!!!

You are a wicked, wicked tease! But I can forgive if some smuttiness is on the way. *sigh* I'm such a perv.

Still dreading the whole showdown that will eventually have to happen between Konoha and Akatsuki. But I also can't wait to see what happens. Darn you for making the whole Akatsuki friendship so believable!! Hugs & Kisses!

“This thing between us…what am I to you?”


He tensed just slightly, and she lowered her arms from around his neck. After a moment he lowered his hands from her waist and stepped away, still holding her gaze as if she had challenged him. In a way, she had. But if he said something along the line of ‘simply a hostage’ or ‘nothing’ she would slap that blank look off of his face, consequences be damned.


“An unexpected turn of events,” he said casually, his voice and expression betraying nothing. It was true enough to not be a lie, but vague and unspecified enough to not convey anything personal.

His response was absolutely brilliant and so in character. I am in love with the characterization of the Akatsuki in this story. Great job of humanizing the lot of them.

Arrrggghh! *rips out hair* I'm fond of SakuDei, but that was just HOT! Why must you do this to me. huh? I want hot passionate sex!!!!!!! I will be waiting for the next chapter...you've got me hooked!!!

ahahahaha, YAYZ! Finally, I cant wait for your next update. ^__^ (SO much tension ahaha)

That's so wrong!! I feel so bad for sakura and the emotion's she is going through. I can't believe I have to wait for a whole another week.

O: -jaw drops-
Nuuu your gonna make me wait a whole week for "whats happening next"
WAHHHH *-*

Please continue soon!