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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you are too wicked. I can't wait til next week to read what has been building up between them. Keep up the good work.
Rox
Rox
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That has got to be the worst cliffhangers I've ever read...(Chapter 13)....worst not as in bad writing, genius writing just....hard-to-bare-with-lack-of-continuation type of worst.
I never reviewed for this story before (I'm sorry ^^), but I feel that I should.
I love how this story makes people realize that there's two sides (or more) to every story. The villian may not be composed 100% of evil, and the hero may not be all goody-two-shoes. Plus the tension in this story is practically palpable from my computer seat.
One of the best Ita/Sak stories I have read so far, and best of luck writing the rest.
I never reviewed for this story before (I'm sorry ^^), but I feel that I should.
I love how this story makes people realize that there's two sides (or more) to every story. The villian may not be composed 100% of evil, and the hero may not be all goody-two-shoes. Plus the tension in this story is practically palpable from my computer seat.
One of the best Ita/Sak stories I have read so far, and best of luck writing the rest.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
noooo, another week, lol. Love the fanart, you should do one plaing in the snow. I loved that scene. and then all of Sakura's musings are so sad. And of course the scene between Deidara and Sakura made me want to cry. Love this so much. I will impatiently wait for more. Jo
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh......this has been the best story I've read in a long time. I personally enjoy Sakura-chan being paired with the Akatsuki, because of the silliness that seems to ensue. I hope there are a lot more silly moments. Was this going to be an Itachi/Sakura fic? What about Kakashi? And I also rather liked the idea of Deidara getting some lovin'. I have an account on DeviantArt, and I took a look at some of your work. As a fellow artist, one well seasoned within the ranks of our society, I can say that is some truly unique and beautiful work you have going there. Is it too much of me to ask that you create a work with the pairing Deidara/Sakura? Your story just makes me itch to have them together, as most of the real interaction happens between the both of them, and they would be so adorable together. It would just be one picture, and I would be so very happy. My sig on DA is Kunouichi-no-Fuyuko....oh, and *clears throat awkwardly* in case you do check my artwork, I've only got one, and it's hideous because I used the Paint app. I am relatively poor, due to college, amongst other things, and cannot afford photoshop like I would like. Or a scanner. Dammeth the holes in my pockets. *sigh*
Well, Update soon, this story is making the hair on my neck stand up in anticipation!!! Good day to you, madam!
Kiyasume
Well, Update soon, this story is making the hair on my neck stand up in anticipation!!! Good day to you, madam!
Kiyasume
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was amazing,intense revelations in this chappie. It was indeed a needed part in the story and I'm happy you took the time to write it. Can't wait for the Ita/Saku next chap I know it's going to be nice I hope you update soon I love this story even though it's going to have a sad ending I still love it. Great job I Dream of your story till you give me more!
Loves Arry
Loves Arry
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. can't wait til next week.
rox
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter. I loved the description and the feelings portrayed throughout this entire chapter. Very deep and very well written. haha, I just dont know what is going to happten. I cannot wait for your next update. ^__^
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woOow...that was amazing!!!
I love it!!! The way you portray each character, especially Sakura-chan...beautiful, strong, intelligent, innocent and so cool!!! Because of this fic, I love her even more!!!
awesome...the way she defeated Tobi-kun, the whole fighting scene, her stubbornness and all!
This fic made me realize things as well...about the Akatsuki, why Itachi-kun killed the whole clan but didn't murder Sasuke-kun, the truth about shinobis, their purpose, their missions, and many more.
I like Deidara-kun...his way of thinking and his attitude. Poor him, he has a very sad past. He doesn't deserve to be in pain!!! I swear to those who murdered his family...I'LL PERSONALLY HUNT THEM DOWN AND MAKE SURE THEY'LL HAVE A SLOW AND EXCRUCIATING DEATH!!!
Why is Kisame calling Sakura-chan princess???...It's not that I don't like it, quite the opposite actually. I'm just curious...Lucky him, he saw Itachi-kun on top of Sakura-chan, with her hands on his neck[?] and his hands under her shirt...I wanna see that too!!! LoL!
i love Tobi-kun!!! He's so adorable!!!
So Kakashi-kun is in-love with Sakura-chan...I knew it!!! But I don't think Sakura-chan feels the same way...
Go NaruHina!!!...Hinata deserves Naruto-kun, she's so sweet and adorable!!! And Naruto-kun deserves her as well...
Oh Sasuke-kun...if only you knew why your hot, smexy brother killed your clan...if only you knew...why do you have to leave Konoha???...will you just stop your childish thoughts of revenge already??!!...argh!!!...sigh...why do you have to go to that snake bastard Orochimaru?!!...you could've just ask Kakashi-kun or team 7 for help...sigh again...if only you knew...
ITACHI-KUN!!! I love him so very much!!! And I love him here as well. I'm glad he's showing some emotions, not the complete stoic Uchiha...And the fever scene...I LOVE IT THE MOST!!!...but to think a simple senbon with poison got him on his knees...it's hilarious! LoL!
I love this fic!!! You are so amazing!!! This is definitely one of the best ItaSaku fic evah!!! Incredible!!!
UPDATE SOON!
^_^
I love it!!! The way you portray each character, especially Sakura-chan...beautiful, strong, intelligent, innocent and so cool!!! Because of this fic, I love her even more!!!
awesome...the way she defeated Tobi-kun, the whole fighting scene, her stubbornness and all!
This fic made me realize things as well...about the Akatsuki, why Itachi-kun killed the whole clan but didn't murder Sasuke-kun, the truth about shinobis, their purpose, their missions, and many more.
I like Deidara-kun...his way of thinking and his attitude. Poor him, he has a very sad past. He doesn't deserve to be in pain!!! I swear to those who murdered his family...I'LL PERSONALLY HUNT THEM DOWN AND MAKE SURE THEY'LL HAVE A SLOW AND EXCRUCIATING DEATH!!!
Why is Kisame calling Sakura-chan princess???...It's not that I don't like it, quite the opposite actually. I'm just curious...Lucky him, he saw Itachi-kun on top of Sakura-chan, with her hands on his neck[?] and his hands under her shirt...I wanna see that too!!! LoL!
i love Tobi-kun!!! He's so adorable!!!
So Kakashi-kun is in-love with Sakura-chan...I knew it!!! But I don't think Sakura-chan feels the same way...
Go NaruHina!!!...Hinata deserves Naruto-kun, she's so sweet and adorable!!! And Naruto-kun deserves her as well...
Oh Sasuke-kun...if only you knew why your hot, smexy brother killed your clan...if only you knew...why do you have to leave Konoha???...will you just stop your childish thoughts of revenge already??!!...argh!!!...sigh...why do you have to go to that snake bastard Orochimaru?!!...you could've just ask Kakashi-kun or team 7 for help...sigh again...if only you knew...
ITACHI-KUN!!! I love him so very much!!! And I love him here as well. I'm glad he's showing some emotions, not the complete stoic Uchiha...And the fever scene...I LOVE IT THE MOST!!!...but to think a simple senbon with poison got him on his knees...it's hilarious! LoL!
I love this fic!!! You are so amazing!!! This is definitely one of the best ItaSaku fic evah!!! Incredible!!!
UPDATE SOON!
^_^
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh, I am so nervous, I don't want anyone to die, I love deidara, and I can't wait for more. aaahhh- sorry s nervous Jo
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Happy squeal!! I loved it! And I'm with Sakura...I dread her rescue, but I'm curious about who will get out alive. Either way, it's gonna be difficult. Oooooh, I just can't wait!!!!! Hugs & Kisses!