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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... it's coming to an end!... What will happen to.. to.. everything!... I can't wait for it!!!.... sigh... that was a really good chapter.. and yeah it really showed Sakura's 'Perception' =) Can't wait fot the next chapter xD and the art is really well done... made me smile at the work =)
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story can't believe it's 3:33 in the morning and I been checking snice midnight to see if the story was up. Now next saturady seems so far away!!
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot woot.
con't wait for the next chappie!!
con't wait for the next chappie!!
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww i love deidara he is my fav character i think he and tobi make the most halarious team i love how youre portraying him hes so kwl and tobi is just so adorablely clueless awesome story theyre all so in character (or what you could assume that akatsuki characters are like behind closed door LOL)!!!
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! *squee* Itachi is so hot! The sexual tension between him and Sakura, OMG! *swoons* Sorry.. had to deviate into ultra fangirl-ness. >.< *takes a breath* Okay, back to normal, calm scholarly review. *ahem* I love how your write Itachi's reactions to their changing relationship... I think it's very realistic. Whereas you had him treat her as almost an interesting experiment, testing her attraction to him against her will, almost using it against her, now you show how much it's affecting him that he can't just toy with her that way anymore. Now it's as real for him as it's become for her. ^^ Mm... may I say that little "almost" moment in the inn... *dies* That was so wonderfully rendered. I love the "getting together" portion of any coupling more than anything else, because the beginnings always seem the sweetest, so I'm fine with them being interrupted because I know later it will only be better for it! ^^ Plus it adds that "OMG what are the other Akatsuki going to do about this!?" speculation to it. Haha, I love the Kisame/Deidara convo over it.. I really think you capture their individual personalities on downtime so well... ^^ Especially since we have really only seen them when they're plotting/doing evil in the manga/anime. I've always wondered what the Akatsuki do when there are no innocents to torment, and this definitely gives me a window to their "normal" world. But.. mm.. I love the Deidara and Sakura tension too. I wonder how far you'll carry the triangle love affair... ^^ I am anticipating Saturday's next installment, so please please please write more! Too many things I love about this story to say much more other than GREAT JOB!
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! One more thing I was wondering, though you don't have to respond if you deem it unworthy. The revelation in the latest chapters about Tobi... won't go into it because it may be some spoiler for someone who isn't caught up on Shippuden... will you carry that into the story or keep it your own way, with his original depiction? Just wondering. ^^
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. God I'm even starting to like Kisame because of it. Itachi is sooooooooo CUTE! He acting like a moody teeenager but still hasn't lost the aloof Itachi appeal. Deidara is awesome but seriously getting jealous of Itachi, I wouldn't be surprised if he does make a pass or two at Sakura and gives Itachi some competition. Tobi is adorable! He's like the stupid little brother who annoys you but at the same time you love him anyway because he's too cute to stay mad at. Sakura's actions are a little surprising but not unrealistic, I mean for Godsake! who could, in their right mind, turn down someone as handsome, dashing, and sexy as Itachi Uchiha.
Wonderful story keep going!
Wonderful story keep going!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow! Ya know, I never really was much of an ItaSaku fan cause I was too busy fangirling over KakaSaku. So I saw the summary for your story and was like, 'eh....no.' And then during a stint of boredom I read it and LOVE happened! I absolutely adore how she seems to be taking a liking to Akatsuki. And the Itachi/Sakura interaction is HOT. But now I'm torn. I want her to go back to Konoha (since the KakaSaku fangirl in me is still alive and kicking) but I also want her to be with Itachi. *sigh* I guess I'll have to wait patiently (well, as patiently as I can which isn't saying much)until you update again. At least I have noticed you update pretty regularly! ^__^ Hugs & Kisses!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First I must say is yummy another steamy hot lime from you makes my day! Ans Secondly I love your art your very good. well can't wait for your next update I at the edge of my seat with suspense what is to happen I don't know wahhh!!! I need to know hehehe See you soon I hope
Loves Arry
Loves Arry
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wahhh m'azing chapter ^^
makeout scene was greaat xDD
update soon, mkay xDD
makeout scene was greaat xDD
update soon, mkay xDD