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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O Wow! Amazing Chapter, Kisame walked in on them..Hohohoho, Continue Updating, your a great author and artist, i saw those pictures O_o...*drool* And you even did some from Dirty Deeds, this story and yours are the ones i can't wait to read! =)
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Much love! I'll have you know I squeal in joy every time I see an update. Yay!
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update this soon!!
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved this chappie. so kawaii!! OMG, they got walked in on, lol. And poor Deidara. You should def. do a deidara and saku fiv one day. And I hope Itachi feels a little jealous. lol.. so good, can't wait for more.
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your writing style is excellent, and I enjoy the way you present the characters. I also admire the slow build of sexual tension. I have found it can be a difficult technique to grasp. Please continue!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gah, I love you.
I really wish I could write out a worthy review, but that's the only phrase that keeps popping into my head whenever you update.
I really wish I could write out a worthy review, but that's the only phrase that keeps popping into my head whenever you update.
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn... now thats a good story.
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Snap! xD ... That was a great chapter, can't wait until next week!
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah! That chapter was soooo good. really awesome, and leave ya wanting more. I just cannot wait for your next update. ^__^
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're an evil, *evil* woman. D:
But yes, this chapter was very well done. I loved how you have both Itachi and Sakura. Sakura is strong, but not extremely powerful. Itachi desires her, but that does not change the fact he would kill her if necessary. And now, with their kiss, and then the subsequent battle... *heart* Oh, so wonderful! And I loved how you had that fire jutsu--and Itachi's reaction to it. So true; even if dying, he does not fail to note the irony.
And now, oh now, you have Deidera possibly become jealous/moody over them, and yet no false conclusions were made about finding Sakura and Itachi in the position that they were--the other Akatsuki were able to determine fairly quickly that something was wrong, and not apparent to the naked eye. But the jealousy is still planted, and can arise from this situation. Sakura can be *righteously* upset over Dei's reactions, without the whole "OMG, he /saw that/?!" crap most people do.
I hate you for making me wait to find out what happens next. You're /evil/... *hisses*
But I have to say, this is turning out to be my one of my favorite stories. :3
But yes, this chapter was very well done. I loved how you have both Itachi and Sakura. Sakura is strong, but not extremely powerful. Itachi desires her, but that does not change the fact he would kill her if necessary. And now, with their kiss, and then the subsequent battle... *heart* Oh, so wonderful! And I loved how you had that fire jutsu--and Itachi's reaction to it. So true; even if dying, he does not fail to note the irony.
And now, oh now, you have Deidera possibly become jealous/moody over them, and yet no false conclusions were made about finding Sakura and Itachi in the position that they were--the other Akatsuki were able to determine fairly quickly that something was wrong, and not apparent to the naked eye. But the jealousy is still planted, and can arise from this situation. Sakura can be *righteously* upset over Dei's reactions, without the whole "OMG, he /saw that/?!" crap most people do.
I hate you for making me wait to find out what happens next. You're /evil/... *hisses*
But I have to say, this is turning out to be my one of my favorite stories. :3