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by cynchick

schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have never found a story where Sakura ends up with the Akatsuki that I actually enjoy. That is until I found your little gem of a fic. I am addicted to this story completely. There are like three stories on all of AFF that are ongoing that I can actually stomach right now, and yours is one of them. Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this. I was starting to give up on the fandom because of the grand-suckage that was beginning to ensue. Your story gives me hope, and it makes me infinitely happy every time you update.

Once again THANK YOU. Please update soon.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Finally some Itachi/Sakura action! hehe! Poor Tobi out cold and missing the dancing Sakura show!
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, it was hot. Very nicely done, though I wonder what Deidera's up to when Itachi was groping Sakura.

Deidera: Hm, Sakura left a bit ago (and damn, I'm still hard from that dance), and the Itachi was quick to leave as well. They share a room with only one bed, and there has always been a certain tension between the two. ...Wait, doesn't this mean I have to carry these two fat-asses *by myself*?!

Kisame/Tobi: *snooooooooore*

Deidera: Fuck it all!

But that does bring up a good point, so I think. I wouldn't be surprised in Deidera was interested in Sakura, and if he realized Itachi was as well, what would he do? I can see him both backing off (because it's Itachi, and that guy's *scary*), and stupidly challenging Itachi. The thought process for the latter could be that he believes/knows Itachi is only lusting after Sakura, and he himself is more interested in her all around--she's smart, strong, appreciates art, and he is attracted to her. She also knows of his past (he himself told her), and accepts it without pitying him. I can see where he could fall in love with her--he's also an Akatsuki who is, I believe, *capable* of that emotion still without twisting it in some estrange way (Zetsu, I think, would eat his love so they could be "together forever" or something freaky). So yeah, a possible love triangle, thing. Or even just between Itachi and Dei, with Sakura only attracted to Itachi.

I do wonder if you read reviews.
person roxnroll
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay - i turned into a big puddle of goo at the end of this chapter. hmm-how do you choose between Kakashi and Itachi - two of the finest men in the series? I would have a hard time choosing. Keep on updatind.
rox
person Himoto
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked on your fanfiction, my dear...write more!
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow so cold, I need a shower after that, lol. So sad no more tobi and no more deidara. I really like those two, please no same fate in you fic. I am glad I fit in the time to read this, but I finished the new harry Potter book pretty easy! have a good week!!
Jo
person bakita11
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another Great Chapter! Keep it Up!
person hasu86
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter! and very insightful! and yes, that scene was beyond hotness and aiya, you just had to stop it! and kakashi loves her! damn it, i'm a huge kaka/saku fan too, aiiiiyaaaa, the plot you weave is just too sinful! can't wait to read more so please continue soon!
-hasu86
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohoho. Very nice chappy. ah, I feel the intense need to know what happens next. seriously cannot wait for your next update! ^__^
person ninjakitty
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're a TEASE!!!!!!!

so cruel but such a good chapter!!