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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah man. I want to read more ^__^ ehehe. This chapter was real good (as is the rest of this story) very well written and good plot and basic story flow. I cannot wait for your next update.
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! I love this story sooo much, you write beautifully! Also, it helped me get over my writer's block! I can not wait for the next chapter! You rule! =) (My new favorite fanfic.) The Akatsuki are the best, no? ^_^ Such wonderful work you do...Okay, I'll stop with my compliments... sounds like I'm ass kissing here, but I'm being honest!
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww Deidara's Story was so sad... Great Chapter =) More!
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pats on head.
Its alright, at least he went out the way he would have wanted. But I'm sad too yeah. He was one of my faves darnit!
So the fact this chapter had a lot to do with him really did make his story all that more poignant.
Great work ^-^
Its alright, at least he went out the way he would have wanted. But I'm sad too yeah. He was one of my faves darnit!
So the fact this chapter had a lot to do with him really did make his story all that more poignant.
Great work ^-^
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cries too*
Poor Deidara...*sigh* well...that's fate. The art kills the artist huh...? =(
It was a great chapter by the way! You really rock!
Hope we can see a bit more Itachi/Sakura moments in the following chappies...*makes puppy eyes*
Poor Deidara...*sigh* well...that's fate. The art kills the artist huh...? =(
It was a great chapter by the way! You really rock!
Hope we can see a bit more Itachi/Sakura moments in the following chappies...*makes puppy eyes*
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like your plot line so it far. its turning out to be an awesome story. can't wait for the next chapter
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!! I'm dying to know what happens next!
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a most wonderful chapter! goodness, i love your writing and you totally inspire me to improve mine! and yaay, sakura finally healed deidara's arm! i love the interaction between them and goodness, i almost want them to get together instead! i can't wait for the next chapter, so continue soon!
-hasu86
-hasu86
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I love this fic. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Rox
Rox
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I know the spoiler you're talking about, and it doesn't bother me.
Anyway, yay for another wonderful chapter! You always seem to mix the perfect go-get-'em Sakura with her natural abilities. I really like how she was able to keep up with them, but refused to let them know of her weakness, and her refusal to be carried like a "toddler". I also enjoy how they clustered around her in the seedy place; it made me think of a Mafia (in this case, Akatsuki) Princess.
Anyway, yay for another wonderful chapter! You always seem to mix the perfect go-get-'em Sakura with her natural abilities. I really like how she was able to keep up with them, but refused to let them know of her weakness, and her refusal to be carried like a "toddler". I also enjoy how they clustered around her in the seedy place; it made me think of a Mafia (in this case, Akatsuki) Princess.