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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Phenomenal. I've always thought about how there are two sides to every story and everything changes through perception. Kind of like the theory of relativity, haha.
I absolutely loved this story. I love the highs, the lows, the happiness, the tragedies, just everything about this story. I wouldn't have changed it in any way (not that it was my choice anyway). Every aspect of this story correlated to each other and fit together with ease. This story had comedy, drama, romance (I would like to highlight the romance ^^), tragedy, action, suspense, and most importantly, a kick-ass message.
I would like the repeat that I love this story!!! Until next time, later.
I absolutely loved this story. I love the highs, the lows, the happiness, the tragedies, just everything about this story. I wouldn't have changed it in any way (not that it was my choice anyway). Every aspect of this story correlated to each other and fit together with ease. This story had comedy, drama, romance (I would like to highlight the romance ^^), tragedy, action, suspense, and most importantly, a kick-ass message.
I would like the repeat that I love this story!!! Until next time, later.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the ending! I didn't feel like you discounted the ItaSaku at all, and I'm a big fan of KakaSaku too, so it was all good for me. XD I'm looking forward to any sequels you might throw at us. <3
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just got done reading your fanfic, took me three days b/c of school but I really couldn't stop myself when I started reading. This has the be one of the best I've read in a LONG time and I really do hope that you right that sequel. I also think you did a wonderful job with all the important scense including the final battle between Sasuke and Itachi. I could see their expressions and almost felt their emotions. Truly a wonderful piece of literature. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read some of your other fanfics in the future!
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am happy and sad to see this story end. I am happy becuase it was written and ended so beautifully. I am sad because there isnt more. but I feel that same way with all great stories. I have thoroughly enjoyed your writting style and how you let the story unfold. Great work.
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I was nearly in tears when it all ended. Personally, I didn't even think it needed an epilogue, yet I enjoyed it. I loved the idea of Sasuke and Hanabi, a pairing I never even considered. And I admit, I was a bit leery of the Kakashi/Sakura at the end, feeling that was just going to be a cop-out, but you wrote that scene so beautifully, and so to the point, it worked out amazingly well. Mad appreciation to you, this story is truly one of my favorites.
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love it! That's my favorite basic storyline: ItaSaku, then KakaSaku because ItaSaku can't work out in the end. But beyond the basic storyline appeal, your story progressed well, was well-written to the point of making me cry more than once (and I don't cry too often), and had some interesting insights. Just one criticism ... I'm not sure "caressed over" is the correct usage of the word "caress;" I think it stands alone. Alternatives might be "ghosted over," which I think you did use, "brushed over," "stroked," "swept over," "skimmed over," "explored," etc. That aside, congratulations on writing an excellent story. I'm looking forward to the potential continuation/sequel (and maybe some more KakaSaku-ness *wink*).
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read many fanfictions, believe me (english and french -I'm french^^-). And I rarely leave review. But when I do, it means that the story really moved me. You made a story completely true to the real characters' dimension. You passed real deep feelings through your story, far beyond the simplest ones we usual encontrer in other fics. I'll stop here but know you have another fan^^
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, a sequel would be awesome. Plus I so loved this. I don't know what I am going to read now, well, actually I do becuase I have tons of homework I should be doing. But anyways, that was so kawaii, and I you could see me you would know that I am doing a standing ovation for you. Best fic I ever read (and ythis is talking about6/7 years of reading fics. I will miss this but I loved the fluffy ending!! Arigatoo!! Thanks, Jo.
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! No really, it took me forever to read this story. I pride myself in finishing chapters quickly and these chapters went on and on and on and it took me sooooo looooong. >.< But, I wouldn't have finished the first chapter if I thought this story was terrible. I think you did a very good job in portraying the characters and your transition chapters were appreciated. I was highly impressed with your style of writing and also with the fact that you could keep it flowing so smoothly. I also have to appologize for not reviewing every single chapter but I figure one long one should do it. I loved that fact that you generalized being a shinobi, making it seem like the world really is. Like in wars, BOTH sides believe they're right. ^^ Sakura becoming wise to that fact was a wonderful way to help the story a long and was a good lesson. The one and only thing I have a problem with is Sasuke/Hyuga relations. I feel like there would be a bloodline gene battle and they'd cancel each other out or their kids would be one or the other. It would kind not be good for the Uchiha clan if all of their kids took on the Hyuga bloodline limit. Anyways, I loved your story and I hope to read a lot more from you!
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really liked that! SO CUTE OMG between Kakashi & she! I'd read a sequel if you wrote it. Lovely!