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by cynchick

schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love deidra. now i kinda wish it was a deidra and sakura fic instead lol. i really feel for the guys even though their evil. please update soon!
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh, are you talkig about sad because of Itachi, please don't make him die in this. Or are you talking about Deidara, if so, me too, he's so officially gone next friday but please don't kill him off!! I am sad he is going for reals. I think your story has me liking him a lot. But anyway, i am looking forward to more and forever R.I.P to our fav. artist, Deidara
Jo
person bakita11
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh That was an amazing story, you should defintely continue it! I love the fact that there's a story here and it's not just... random sex scenes... hehe... It's really good and should continue it.
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do like update soon please It's awesome but I love how she's falling for another group of boys hehe I've never read a fanfic that Sakura goes off with Itachi but they never become a couple only have sex and its a memory for Sakura or she's pregnant and takes care of the baby I hope you come up with something different. oh and I love how your taking it slow too . all and all I love it!

Loves Arry
person LadyApollonia
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just have one word to say to you... Please? *gives big puppy eyes* I love this fic! Kakashi's in love with her! Itachi wants her! Deidara would be fun to mess around with... I love the tension! There's something so sexy about a dangerous man. Mmm! Itachi...
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, it's good that you added this tension in here, because it was starting to seem somewhat Dei/Saku. Don't get me wrong, I like their interactions, but still.

person angel
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love, love, love it!

I can just feel something with Itachi and Sakura.. Can't wait to see more of that. lol

Also love the interaction with Sakura and Deidara and Kisame. I like the bantering and also the flirting.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

You're doing a great job. :)
person roxnroll
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That little kitchen sink scene was hot! I loved it. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Rox
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Awesome story. I love the length of the chapters, the plot, the writing style... everything. This is probable one of the better fanfics anywhere I have read and Im just waiting to see where it takes me next. Very, very nice. I love it a lot. I also like how you are able to keep the characters in character for the story, and actually have a very good plot going, along with your fanominal writing. I had an awesome time reading this story and I can not wait for your next update.
person Himoto
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am hooked on this story, please..PLEASE continue it!