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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is one of the best Sakura/Itachi fanfics I've ever read. You've nailed every characters personality down perfectly,and the things you're adding too them like the mystery behinds Deidaras old house is very interesting. I can't wait to see the next update for this.
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another good chapter. I'm glad you were able to make this one out in time, as I always enjoy a good up-date.
I really like how you have Sasuke in here. He's not overly "OMG, my SaKUra-chAN!" but neither is he "Tch, annoying female." He knows how strong he is, having seen her damage, but is having to come to terms with it like I think he would.
I also enjoy your interactions with Sakura and the Akatsuki, especially Deidera and Kisame. Though, I do wonder how she was able to catch the kunai thrown at the back of her head, simply because of the strange reach it'd cause. Did she reach over her head, or up and around her back?
I really like how you have Sasuke in here. He's not overly "OMG, my SaKUra-chAN!" but neither is he "Tch, annoying female." He knows how strong he is, having seen her damage, but is having to come to terms with it like I think he would.
I also enjoy your interactions with Sakura and the Akatsuki, especially Deidera and Kisame. Though, I do wonder how she was able to catch the kunai thrown at the back of her head, simply because of the strange reach it'd cause. Did she reach over her head, or up and around her back?
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah another chap. great one might I add. I love the way you know your naruto history and can't wait for the next chapater.
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another beautiful chapter! I feel compelled to keep reviewing just to try and assure that there will continue to be more to this awesome story! I love how descriptive you get with everything, but not overly so. I have a feeling that everything is planned out well in the scheme of the tale...please keep going!
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I like the time that you took into laying out this chapter. I can't wait until the update.
Rox
Rox
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter wasent boring at all!! I love how Sakura is starting to get used to being a hostage and the fact Sasuke has come to terms (sorta) with the fact that Sakura and Naruto are more than just ex-teamates. ^_^ please update soon.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so so awesome once again. Pure genius. So great. Sauske's reaction was great. I can't wait to see Konoha's reactions that their "Daughter" is missing, lol. Also, you have me liking all memeber of akatsuki, how weird is that? Can't wait for next week, it is going to be a long week!
Jo (Btw, the other review you see under this name and isn't signed by me is my sister's)
Jo (Btw, the other review you see under this name and isn't signed by me is my sister's)
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i don't feel like logging in sry anyway your story friggin' rocks man sorry for my grammar and spelling but its 1 o'clock in the am and I wasn't planning on staying up this late. Your story was so very intriguing that I found myself sucked in! I was in the middle of giving myself a manicure too! Not that I really minded reading this intensely captivating piece of Fan Fiction, on the contrary! It has definitely been a while since I have read fiction this good. However, I find that these wonderful stories are often then left deserted and it disappoints me to no end! I am hopeful that this will not be the case with your story. So please feel free to enchant me with more of this story and maybe even others.
Gin_bug
Gin_bug
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is the best, intense, dark but freakin awesome story I have read in a very long time. I am so drwn into it and I am so glad I read it. I cannot wait for more and please please please update. I can't wait for more. Like, seriously, this is almost as good as the manga. You could write you won manga. I love Kisame, so funny, so great. I cannot wait for more. Jo
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfic, it seems magnificently planned out, and the Akatsuki all seem very in character. Many stories seem to lose the deadliness of the Akatsuki members as they try to reveal their personalities, I'm glad this fic isn't like those. Great job!