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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I rarely double-review, but I felt it necessary. This story is amazing, and with the amount I have read, it takes a lot to impress me lately. You've done an excellent job at portraying all that embodies the Akatsuki members, and somehow you've made me love Itachi even more than I already do. I've even found new respect for the oddness of Kisame and Tobi. I can see this is going to be a long affair, and I'm eager to see how this plot turns out, please do not lose your muse!
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more!
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story as it's believable, good spelling and grammar, and has good characterizations, save Suigetsu and Karin, however. After traveling around for 6+ months, I think they would have at least migrated to the whole mutual ignore, occasionally snippy comments when the other says/does something stupid. Not a constant word war.
I'll wait for the next up-date!
I'll wait for the next up-date!
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome story thus far
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Update soon! I can't wait to find out what Sakura will do!
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If, during the course of this story, you allow Sakura to get one good hit to the balls of any member of the Akatsuki I will love you forever. Seriously each and every one of them need a swift kick to the nuts and Sakura is just the one to give it. I love your story and am anxiously awaiting more.
-Emily
-Emily
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. :) Please update as soon as possible.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still a great read. Keep it going.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far so good just don't be like the others and start writing a good story then stopping
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heres a happy dose of review to cure your writers block! ^_^ i really love this story and how well your portray sakura and itachi. Its rare to see a story continue with such skill. I cant wait till you update.