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for Perception

by cynchick

person MrsCake
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful story! Congradulations on finishing it and whether you write a sequal or not, I'm sure whatever else you write will be just as great!
person gaara89
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is honestly the best Het story I've ever read in my life. I say Het, because I know of a Naru/Gaa/Naru story called "I knew you would find me", that is just as good. I will read the sequel when and if you write one. This was amazing. I've never read such a good ita/saku fanfiction.
person roxnroll
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I would love to read a sequel. This is my favorite fic to date.
Rox
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(after reading your author's notes) I completely agree with how you put Kakashi and Sakura together in this in the epilogue. Actually, I think that it was *because* of her relationship/fling/thingamabob with Itachi that she now fits so well with Kakashi. She was able to race past the years that in a sense separated them, and the experiences that he had over her that made the two of them just the slightest bit incompatible. Kakashi, in my mind, is a bit jaded; so now that Sakura has that same experience, they fit together better. I think that is why when the epilogue put them together it felt so right.

I still stand by this being my favorite Naruto fic of all time. It was absolutely amazing.
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whether a sequel or not keep writing...PLEASE!!! IT was awesome
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, such a good 'ending' too ^.^ If you do write a sequel, I can't wait to read it.
person Kaysan
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I said I was a KakaSaku fangirl and it has just been reinforced! While I enjoyed the ItaSaku (obiviously since I read the whole thing), I can't help but be thrilled that it ended with Kakashi and Sakura. And I would love to read a sequel, as long as it's still KakaSaku since the ending was just completely beautiful. I truly loved it. Can't wait to see more from you! Hugs & Kisses!
person hasu86
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've been steadily catching up with this story, as i fell behind in many of my readings since school started again, and damn did i love every second of it. you just have this way with words and portraying emotion that i'm quite envious of really =P i'm especially happy that you decided to put in an epilogue (and a bit of kaka/saku, yesss!!! not that the ita/saku, and the barely there dei/saku wasn't appreciated of course!). it just gave everything a sense of finality and hope, that good things do come out of all the tragedies and the darkness that's always there. a very fitting end to a wonderfully crafted story. i feel grateful to have read it and a world of thanks for sharing your work! i look forward to more!
-hasu86
person ANdrew
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude that was an awsome story. great ending, kind of saw it coming after chapter 17 ish. well good idea keeping the bride and groom hidden till about half way. kept me suspense. i don't think you should write a sequal to this it ended perfectly
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you write a sequel to perception. Loved this story so much.