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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you don't keep writing....Kami-sama I'll throw the biggest temper tantrum you've ever seen...
Honestly I loved this story and have copied it over to microsoft word so I can read it whenever I want...
Please, please keep writing you are very talented
Honestly I loved this story and have copied it over to microsoft word so I can read it whenever I want...
Please, please keep writing you are very talented
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter, so bittersweet. It almost made me cry but I was expecting the worst Loved it, Jo
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah yea yeah!!!! Thre cheers. An epilogue... oh aren't you jk rowling, lol. I loved the ending, the beginning made me cry. Oh and who is miss sakura going to end up with? Is there still a spark between her and kakashi? Oh I loved this. You should write a story for sauske/sakura, that would be great, but then again you you should do one with sakura and everyguy becuase you wirte chemistry so well. Anyway, can't wait for the epilogue. Jo
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't reviewed this fic before but I thought now would be the best time to ^-^ I was a bit wary at first about reading this fic because I'm not a full on hardcore Itachi/Sakura shipper. I like the couple, don't get me wrong, I just haven't read any fics (until this one) that peaked my interest. But when I read the first chapter, I knew I'd be hooked. Your writing is fluent and beautiful and descriptive. You added in all the necessary elements that make a story worth reading. And you made this plot believeable. Not many fanfic writers can do that. I kinda wish that Kishimoto would take some hints from this =P Your writing in the second to last chapter had me in tears: Sasuke's anguish, Itachi's death, Tobi's death...everything. As much as I KNEW Itachi would have to be killed off, it still made me cry (I'm such a sap XD). I'd love to see more fanfics from you because you're such a talented writer. And I love how you wrote the interaction between Sasuke and Sakura. I'm a hardcore shipper for them, but I also love the idea of them being best friends and you wrote it perfectly. That little joke of Sasuke's at the end was a nice touch ^-^ I've wanted to do fanart for this fic and someday I might, but as of now, unfortunately, I have a horrible artist block. But if I ever do fanart, I'll PM you at DeviantArt. Take care!
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see the end of this tale. xD In a lot of ways it's an epic. Poor Sasuke though, given a time limit to have a family like he's up to stud. His conversation with Sakura at the bridge is probably the best part of the whole chapter; because I don't think he's ever seriously talked to her as an equal before. And he understands best what she's been through. All in all, it was great.
I wonder if she'll secretly wear Itachi's necklace hidden under her shirt collar or something like that in the future as her own private remembrance.
I wonder if she'll secretly wear Itachi's necklace hidden under her shirt collar or something like that in the future as her own private remembrance.
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Please update soon! I can't wait!!
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Best story in the Naruto fandom that I have read to date. If someone had told me a year ago that my favorite fanfic ever would be a ItaSaku + Akatsuki fic, I would have laughed myself silly. Oh fandom, how you always love to throw me for a loop. The fates are laughing quite hard now, I'm sure.
I must thank you, sincerely, for the best read I've had in ages, print or fanfic. It was the depth and hope and realism in your story, the meaning you had with your words and ideas, that made this story one of the quintessential fanfics of the Naruto fandom. I am awaiting the epilogue, because I want to know if the tiny hints thrown in early on in the story will pan out. I trust you completely though, because you have the ability to make anything work.
I must thank you, sincerely, for the best read I've had in ages, print or fanfic. It was the depth and hope and realism in your story, the meaning you had with your words and ideas, that made this story one of the quintessential fanfics of the Naruto fandom. I am awaiting the epilogue, because I want to know if the tiny hints thrown in early on in the story will pan out. I trust you completely though, because you have the ability to make anything work.
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was truly amazing! I read this straight through and loved it! I love how it seemed you made them all still in character to some content. But truly this was wonderful, this was a great idea and I loved how this went. I about died when Sasuke made the joke, but I am secretly hoping it wasn't a joke. What can I say? I am a hopeless romantic
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heck, I'll be there for the epilogue! I loved the ending, but I'm also curious about where it goes from here. This was actually the chapter I was waiting for, besides seeing who survived the fight. I wanted to see how the team coped with what Sakura had done and you wrote it beautifully. Can't wait for the epilogue! Hugs & Kisses!
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn dude, that... was... awsome. great ending. grat story in general. very deep in plot, conflict, lovd it. thank you for writing this it will forever remain with me. try to write an epolouge. that would be sweet