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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Tissue, anyone?" Well isn't that the FUCKING UNDERSTATMENT OF THE YEAR!?! That last chapter was a frickin' doozie. Damn emotional rolercoaster. At least Karin got it, tho. The bitch killed Tobi! Sure, I saw that coming but it didn't make it any less painful when it actually happened. I get sad when childlike characters are killed. I wish her death had been more drawn out and painful. Oh well, there were more important matters to attend to. Itachi's revelation to Sasuke and his death were very well done. As was team 7's reunion. Mondo kudos, to you for that. As well as Sakura's farewell to Kisame and Deidara. Niagra-frickin-Falls, yo! Great job so far. I love this chapter and will be waiting for you to post the next one. EXCELLENT STORY!
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... I can't stop crying. It started since the last ending of the chapter, and now it just wont... stop. That was just too sad... I haven't cried this hard in a while...
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honestly I only had two hopes for this fict, I won't lie. Kisame doesn't die, and Sakura got pregnant xD. I can't help myself. Well done so far.
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was simply beautiful. You truly are a talented author. I have been following this story from the beginning and was never disappointed. And yep, I did discreetly use a tissue lol. Seriously though, that was awesome. I look forewards to reading the last chapter and other stories you may write. Keep it up.
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I'm still crying. I have to say this is one of the best written fics that I've ever read. I hate to see this fic end, but all good things... I can't wait to see how this all wraps up. Great job.
Rox
Rox
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude, awsome conclusion to the fight., it was indeed very heart wrentching. death of a lover, but the reunion of friends. please finish soon. the return home so to speak. like an epologe. look into the sakura kakashi thing from before she was captured.
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaa Bawling my eyes out... it was really good *sob*
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's one of the best stories I have ever read, fanfiction or not right here. I love it; how you hinted all along subtely and then not so much too what would become of everyone. I find that you unlike any other fanfiction writer have successfully humanized Itachi while staying true to his outward personality. No one else has done this, and I salute you for it; in fact it's why I was first interested in reading this piece in the first place.
Which is why despite how you set it up so that he would die, I was still predictably heartbroken when he died; because despite all the bad in him, there was good too and I hope that Sakura will remember and treasure that about him. There is only one line in this chapter or rather any that confuse me, and it's this: "For some reason he didn’t include Sakura in that equation, after what he’d witnessed today." Does that mean that they [whoever] saw Sakura as better or less so than the others in her company? That's all I was confused by.
I have left my e-mail here, and hope that you will notify me or other readers if and when you write another piece. I'd scarce be able to wait to read it.
-L
Which is why despite how you set it up so that he would die, I was still predictably heartbroken when he died; because despite all the bad in him, there was good too and I hope that Sakura will remember and treasure that about him. There is only one line in this chapter or rather any that confuse me, and it's this: "For some reason he didn’t include Sakura in that equation, after what he’d witnessed today." Does that mean that they [whoever] saw Sakura as better or less so than the others in her company? That's all I was confused by.
I have left my e-mail here, and hope that you will notify me or other readers if and when you write another piece. I'd scarce be able to wait to read it.
-L
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*falls on teh floor bawling!* ITACHI!!!! We'll miss you! So cute yet so dead now. *pouts.* but i understand why you killed him...but it was so effing sad!!!
Ubber amounts of kuddos, i'm gonna track your stories in teh future, too good of a writter not to track.
Ubber amounts of kuddos, i'm gonna track your stories in teh future, too good of a writter not to track.
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SORRY TOBI!!! I almost forgot you!!! WHY DID YA KILL TOBI!!! *bawls again.* life isn't fair. I need lots of comfort CANDY NOW!!
*grabs a snickers.*
TOBI!!! We still love ya though!
*grabs a snickers.*
TOBI!!! We still love ya though!