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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was one of the best chapters yet. awesome story plot
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it! I almost cried while reading the last two chapters. :( Don't worry, it's not a bad thing. I think one important aspect of being a good writer is to really capture the essence of the characters in your story, and you conveyed that brilliantly, especially with Itachi. There was so much intense feeling. Truth be told, my heart was really pounding during Sakura's and Itachi's sex-capade (Chapter 16). :) I'd never realize that Itachi could not be Itachi, you know, and to read about him with some type of feeling is really invigorating for me as a reader. You are one of a handful of authors whose stories I enjoy reading because your excellent transition (and grammar!) makes everything flow. I could actually picture where the characters were, what the environment looked like, etc., that I was very disappointed at the end of each chapter simply because I did not want to stop reading. But a good author always deserves a break. :) Looking forward to the next (or last?) chapter, and thank you for making my reading time very worthwhile.
p.s. Karin got her ass whooped! Woo hoo! I would've bitch-slapped her, too, if she made those same accusations against me. *^_~*
p.s. Karin got her ass whooped! Woo hoo! I would've bitch-slapped her, too, if she made those same accusations against me. *^_~*
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sad but oh so wonderful. I really have no other words now. Just, wonderful. Hugs & Kisses!
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I'm tearing up now You killed TOBI!!!!!! and Itachi was expected but not welcomed man that was sad poor sakura she must feel the worst caught in the middle of it all well Update soon and Then write another amazing one any couple you write I'm sure I'll love
great job at capturing there emotions and the battle itself truly a masterpiece.
Loves Arry
great job at capturing there emotions and the battle itself truly a masterpiece.
Loves Arry
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So well done. The wait is killing me. Best of luck with the next chapter. I'm sure it will be far from easy.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say, that was probably one of the best chapters of any fic that I have ever read. You described it very well - Bittersweet. I cried through most of it. I can almost say that I wish the battle didn't have to happen, but then there would be no story. I can't wait for the update. That's some of the best writing I've ever seen.
Rox
Rox
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know, that I have read many stories/books over the years. "Perception" has been one of the most well written, best plotted, fan-fics I have ever read (I also have never written a review in my life, but your creativity and imagination deserve comment). If you ever decided to write a non fan-fic novel I would gladly read it. Best of luck and keep up the great work!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I love you! That whole chapter was so amazing! You did such a fantastic job. You have made me accept their fates. You're awesome.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your work of art has stirred some powerful emotions inside of me, my dear. Rare is it that someone comes along and is able to weave a tale as you did and make the heart beat in time to the character's and for that, I thank you.
I've been looking forward to the end of this fiction but now I too, have a bittersweet feeling welling up inside, because the final chapter will mean no more. A literary journey has come to an end. Ah, but bravo! This is again, one of the best ItachixSakura pairings because it makes SENSE and you do a wonderful job portraying each Akatsuki member without compromising their character.
I've been looking forward to the end of this fiction but now I too, have a bittersweet feeling welling up inside, because the final chapter will mean no more. A literary journey has come to an end. Ah, but bravo! This is again, one of the best ItachixSakura pairings because it makes SENSE and you do a wonderful job portraying each Akatsuki member without compromising their character.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! I DON'T WANT ITACHI TO DIE!!! WAAAAAAHHHHHH! *sheds tear* that was a gut-wrenching chapter. seriously though, i want itachi and sakura to find a way to be together! i know that it's probably not going to happen that way, but i can hope, can't i? i know that the ending isn't always a happy one. but if i think about it, it could sort-of be a happy ending either way you look at it. it's like an oxymoron... it could be win/win or lose/lose depending on your point-of-view. i have really enjoyed this fic, and if this one ends soon, i will be on the lookout for more of your work. now i'm off to mourn... :``(