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by cynchick

person xosuccubusdreams
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter!! can't wait to see how you end it.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::Tears in her eyes after reading chapter 16:: So much love and passion, my heart is still racing. I swear that chapter is one of the most intimate and touching peices I've ever read. Like Sakura, I too shall lock the memories of this beautiful chapter in my heart and treasure them forever. It was beautiful to see not Itachi Uchiha the S-class missing nin, but Itachi Uchiha, the passionate man and lover. I swear I am currently weeping from this story. It feels like I was there. It sort of reminds me of 'The Last Samurai' Please accept my gratitude for writing such a moving work.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T_T Well...you've gone and done it. **sighs** It isn't very often that I find myself so moved by a story and/or chapter that it brings tears to my eyes...but that last part between Itachi and Sakura did me in. (The part where he told her to not cry for him, that is.) Bravo on a chapter very well done,
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhh You made me cry so many times with this chappie too sad for words. The epic battle is finally here noooo I wanted more love lol oh well I await for the battle eagerly I suppose hehehe I hope you write another story soon or a sequel to this one

Loves Arry update soon
person gaara89
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Best chapter yet! I can't wait for the next one. This is seriously one of the best stories I've ever read.
person Kaysan
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ever have that utterly restless anticipation that comes after reading a super great chapter of a story and can't wait for the next one? Yeah, that's what I'm feeling right now. Dang! While the KakaSaku fangirl in me is still cheering for Kakashi, I can't help but wish there could have been something more permanent for her and Itachi.

And just so you know, you have ruined other ItaSaku stories for me. After reading yours, I just haven't found any others that measure up. There are probably some other good ones out there, but the ones I've found just don't have believable plots. Which yours has in spades. *sigh*

I'm feeling Sakura's dread and anticipation myself. I want to see how things end up but once this is over it's over. Kinda bittersweet. Anyway, can't wait to see what's up next! Hugs & Kisses!
person zeroharm
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn... just damn... the only complaint I have about this chapter is that it ended. Really looking forward to seeing how you end this; and I wouldn't worry, I think the sentiments came out perfectly.
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord...I want to jump through this screen and steal your computer so I can know what happens.
As I've said before this really was an absolutely awesome story and I can't get enough of your writing
please keep it up.
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, you have me crying dammit. It is so sad. I mean I am being so corny and would love for them to stay togther. Sakura and the guys, but she needs her other guys. I can't believe it is almost over. I will say this is the best fanfiction I have ever read, (Including HP fics and all the others I have read).. I will say i am sad to see it end so soon, but it is time. Oh, and I loved the deidara/sakura fic. they would have been so good togeher. And poor tobi and even Kisame. I know people have to die but, dang it, do they have to? lol. I am looking forward to the end, kind of. But I don't know If I can't get the end of this chapter out of my head. Okay, that's enough, I know you have more reviews to read.
Jo
person zenia
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was going to give this a shot... but your little page breaks "XXXXXX... etc" are far too long and I have to scroll massively. Let me know if you shorten them and I will give your story a try.