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Great, as always, wouldn't ya know? Although... poor Naruto. :( and Sasuke.... but mostly Naruto of course! I just mean Sasuke loves Naruto SO much! lol But Naruto...oh... poor Naruto. (Sakura was pretty funny tho, maybe I could get to like her lol)

Ooh! I like I like! Realistic medical descriptions and jujutsu as well! And I also really enjoy the back and forth format you have going on. Revealing little bits at a time. A very enjoyable story! Keep it up dude!

woot! Glad to see you have udpated, I'm just surprised I didn't find this chapter sooner! But wow, what an insightful chapter :3 I was surprised by Naruto saying that he wanted sasuke to be interested in him and then for Sasuke to help him... with his problem later on. omg... I mean... shesh, I was reading, yes it was good, good, oh no, I'm like half way, oh no... even more than half way, omfg!!! awesome! shit! O.o? WHoA! more, no, damn it!!! done...
yes...my emotional spectrum I read your chapter. This was fantastic indeed. I just love it!!!

Another Story Of Yours I Love! I Thought It Was Funny About The Drawing Part And How U Mentioned Titanic. Call Me A Pervert But I'm Kind Of Looking Forward To The *coughcough* Rape. Update Soon!

another super chapter <3 thank you :D

oh my goodness. this is such an awesome story!!! i'll have you know you have me up 3:30 in the morning reading your this story. i really like the angle you're going with this with reverting back from present and past. i find the type of relationship you've woven between naruto and sasuke so endearing and true to the spirit of the anime's personas as well that i wish that there WAS more endearment between naruto and sasuke in the anime..but i guess that sweetness is due a little in part of sasuke being older than naruto and by being 18 from the start of the story that gave him more maturity rather than emoness that the anime seems to force upon him. i'm still restless to know how bad the rape was that led to four years seperation between naruto and sasuke. granted if somebody close to me hurt me in that way i would never want to see that person again, but the boundaries between naruto and sasuke's relationship clearly shows that they both deeply loved each other mutually and with the understanding and bond between them you would think that naruto would have stuck it out and got to the bottom of understanding sasuke's thoughts rather than seperate for four years. and another thing: why did naruto suddenly show up at sasuke's if they haven't seen each other for four years and demand quite abruptly of sasuke's explanation. there must have been something going on slightly before naruto's and sasuke's reunion that forced naruto to go back. it'd be awesome if you replied. but i'm sure my questions would be answered when you update your next chapter. i simply adore long chapters. ^^ great job! i must read Restless when i get the chance cuz i hear you have actual smut in there. very intrigued. hehe

awww *___* i'm glad to have spotted this fic among all those. I liked the roles you assigned to the characters(Tsunade as a doctor is already common, but the policemen ,and, and Gai as a juudo instructor...I laughed my head off when naruto told sasuke 'can you get your money back?'oh god XDDD). I liked the explanation of naruto's healing abilities(weeeh! plot!), and i liked the gradual development of sasuke's feelings and the fact that the word 'yaoi' actually existed there --when sakura mentioned it XDD-- since we're talking about japanese society.

(side note:i hope you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism, i'm doing it only because I care for this fic and want to see it improve^^. Actually, when naruto's cousin hit him that way, it made me think of american society instead of the japanese one. Don't get me wrong, I don't intend to show any racistic attitude much less offend anyone --heck, i dont even know where you come from, to begin with-- just to pinpoint the impression it left me as a reader, if that means commenting too -and I think it does. 'Something' in the way you wrote it gave me a different impression than it should have. Bulling and being aggressive like that, made me think of american movies, where this constantly happens that way~__~ Guess I just wanted you to reflect that writing and language can reveal identity, so that next time you can be more conscious about it, if you want to make it sound like an authentic japanese society --I noticed you've already put some effort in this, like in the real taijutsu name etc^^)

As for the rest, Neji's suggestion was hilarious, funny and convenient!XD And Sasuke having an art studio OMG!! and drawing a naked!naruto yay(i wonder how much self-control it must took out of him not to jump him right there =çççççç= *droooll*)
I'm waiting the rest with impatience, I hope you update soon^__^

sorry me again, i forgot to log in and the mail wouldn't show up ^^;
oh and..that wasn't naruto's cousin, but he so reminded me of H.Potter's Dudley that in the end I used the term, i can't believe my silliness XDDD
great work again^^

I don't think you know how much i like this story. or how much i am looking forward towards the lemon. i mean after reading the lemons from restless. how could someone not feel anticipation. Sasuke must feel like a complete idiot. I mean common, Naruto liked him and he ruined it. I mean what kind of thought was that. Let me not even see if this person wants me i'll just assume and be driven by lust to rape them. Makes me wish guy who watch porn regularly help each other...i can always hope, ne? Either was i am so glad you updated. That much closer to the goal...which you teased me in the summary with. AH so gooood hope you can update sooner.

A lot of suspense! Please update! Sasuke angsting over Naruto and Naruto slowly liking him is so cute!