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for Nameless Desires

by Jelp

schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so much. there's so much tension! i'm afraid naruto's just gonna snap and leave before everything is worked out. then i'm sitting here thinking "please just forgive him and cry and hug and make up or something because you guys are so in love with each other it's not funny!" please please please update soon!
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great chapter. now that naruto told sasuke that he used to like him. i wonder how sasuke is going to clear up naruto's thinking that he was using him as a replacement. i hope kuubyi doesn't torture naruto to much in the next chapter. do you still not see this story as making it past ten chapters. can't wait for the next update.
person ShagTag
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ACKK!!! NOT AN EVIL CLIFF HANGER!!! nooooooooooooo...................*agony*
PLEASE! PLEASE update soon!!! I really love this this fic you have going-it's so squeeable!!!
I can't wait for more and to FINALLY get some NaruSasu action goin on!

signed,
the Crimson Eagle
--better known as,
Orgy-of-Death
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
still love this story please keep going!
person beekayz
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you soooooooooooooooooo much for updating, that chapter was amazing. The way you've shaped their relationship has been so awesome. I can't wait to read the next chapter and finally see what happened between them. <33333 Keep up the lovely work!
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh you updated this!!! It made me really happy seeing you'd updated it ^_^ their conversation seems to be getting more and more intense, Naruto seems so hurt, it's really sad - especially now with Sasuke realising that Naruto had had those types of feelings for him back then. *sigh* anyway, great chp. ^_6 can't wait for the next update.

Ja ne!
Hina xXxx
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, they both have misunderstood each other! I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
person Crimson2006
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God dear, I LOVE this story! This was yet another awesome chapter and the way you write is beautiful! Keep up the good work and I hope that you update soon! ^^
person Allys
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O *Blink blink* Holy Shit. Wow... This could have all been easily avoided. Damn. And the moral of today's story = Communication is key. Heh... I don't even know what to say. I'm sitting here in no small amount of shock. I'm a little confused about the replacement comment, but that just makes the whole thing more intricate and interesting. The bits of description of the rape makes it seem rather brutal and more real as it comes barreling at us in the time frame. This is truly well written. Loved the little smutty bits too, crushing Sasuke is really cute until I remember the outcome of the situation. And I want into Naruto's brain so badly it's ridiculous. Again I commend you. I'm still loving this. The artsy tidbits were really cool as well. But LOL, naked people on the walls and ceiling of the vatican was the least of Michelangelo's rudeness XD. He drew the pope in hell XD. In "The Last Judgement" in that same chapel, O.o, needless to say they didn't get along so well, LOL. Thank you so much for the update. It seems as though the next chapter will get us into the crux of the matter and now I'm really excited XD. Ja na, hope you update soon ♥
person blueh
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O NoooOOOoo... don't stop there! It wsa getting so good! I really love it! Keep updating!