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Wow, this story is so captivating! I like how you're switching between the past and present. Your writing is amazing. Please update soon!

O.O Whoa! Talking about your high quality yaoi fics *cough* Dang this is good! Had hoped it was completed before I clicked it but alas... Love how the story is told in flashbacks, Cannot wait for the (hopefully) explosive lemony happy ending. Right??

Didn't know that guys got around and masturbated together.. Lol or is that just a fanfic thing? Neji suggesting p0rn. CRACK UP! Kenji is a bastard, glad to see Ino gave him his comeuppance.

The age difference is a bit too much (14-18?) but I've always been pretty squicky on age difference..Would've been nicer if Naruto was a bit older.. 16ish? I mean his emotional state is perpetually teens anyway so whats a few more years on paper ya know?

Fantastic fic! Wish there was an alert thingy or something... Shall hopefully keep checking for updates! Keep writing!! Ne?

So glad that you updated :D and things got a lot more complicated it seems before the incident that ahppened between Naruto and Sasuke, ne? *sigh* I hope they can sort this out, I really do, from Naruto's reaction to what happened when he woke up with Sasuke, it could've just been embarassment but he didn't seem all that indifferent :s (or maybe it's just my wishful thinking) but yeah :) lol can't wait for the next update ^_6

Hina xXxx

Jelp..I need to talk to you. I have something i'd like to please discuss. If you could, email me at MissMayumi500@yahoo.com

please..nothing bad, don't worry! ^-^

I love this story so much!!! I always seem to get sucked into the chapter; it almost feels like I'm reading a novel.
On a side note... I ate some Sushi right before I read this...Oh, no! o.0 LOL!XD
Anyway, sorry for the random add in... And PLEASE update soon!!!!! I wanna read more. ^^

OH MY FLIPPIN´GOD!

Thanks for the little parasite lesson. Now I know that when I eat fish (tomorrow) I´ll ask where they got it from. I really dídn´t think such a thing exsisted. o.O So that was a nice little surprise. That you did some reasearch on it, I thought you had made it up. To my delight (and terror) it actually exsists, making this story all the more believable.

-Damp *But!! I LOVE fish!!! I´ll NEVER stop eating it!!*

I just wanted to say that your writing is very well done.
I was afraid to read this at first because of the subject matter.
The story is very drawing. You ease the reader in ever-so smoothly so that they will continue, even tho they what will soon come.
I enjoy all of your work,the stories are flowing. They remind me of the poems I write. I have not writing for a long while and your writing has inspired my thoughts.

If you have an updating list pleas put me on it. monecque@sbcglobal.net

Wow. Hey XD. First off - I'm so happy you updated XD!!!! As usual I loved the chapter. You freaked me out with the sushi parasite though O.o, I love sushi :(. Oh well, I don't live in Brazil or China. It's really cool though. How you incorporated it into kyuubi and the story with Naruto's healing factor etc. That was A+ material XD. I still love the complicated way that you portray their relationship, and I kinda feel even worse for Naruto if he had to deal with Sasuke basically raping him after he went through what's starting to look like a Huge freaking crisis. Can't wait to see where you go with this and what they decide to do in the end. Naruto's comment at the end of the chapter is seriously distressing and also very very true. the morning wood thing was cute though XD. You always send my emotions in about six different directions XD. I love it. Thanks again for the update ♥

the way you had sasuke tempted bythe books was brillant. i was on the floor when i pictured sasuke luring ten year old naruto to the bed with ramen. i just have a question. if you are using kuubyi as a wannabe doctor are oochimaru and kabuto going to be invovled. are they going to eventually show up by the time the whole climax of the kuubyi thing is finished. did oochamimaru have anything to do with him coducting the experiments (like as his mentor or someone he admired). was that jiraiya who was the peeping tom across the street and is he going to show up again. last question is gaara the other victim he is looking for. or his the demon that resides hi the victim (can't spell his name) and gaara his friend or relation. thanks and please update restless soon. that is my the shit story (sorry for the shameless begging).

This is getting really interesting!! /bounces up and down in seat waiting for more!!