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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great. i was surprised that you had neiji give them the sex talk and tapes instead of gai or lee. i would have thought that it would be out of character for him but you made it seem perfectly natural by tying it in with the chakra points i like that. this is really a great story and i hope uou update on the other one as well. an update of nameless then an update of restless (huge hint). thanks.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very original. Nicely worded with an intriuging plot. You keep Naruto and Sasuke well in character. Their very believable. Please update soon.
Chishio
Chishio
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just a great take on Sasuke and Naruto realtionship. It new and fresh, love it. Look forward to the next chapter. Hope you update soon. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke!!! Lusting after a young Naruto and not knowing how to control it! Looks like Naruto is starting to understand better. Great chapter! :)
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, who knew baby Naru was such a tease? LOL, not even Naruto knew, so that makes a grand total of Sasuke being in the know. It's ridiculous how much I enjoy this story. I love that it going on both in the past and in the present (I've probably said that before hmmn, at least this way you know it's true XD).
Highlights for me:
Naruto sucking on Sasuke's finger. I've always found that adorable and I can almost picture the look on Sasuke's face XD.
Naruto and Sasuke's reaction to Gai O.o, LOL. I have no idea what I would do if I ever met anyone like Gai in real life. It's a toss up between running for the hills or finding him horridly fascinating and amusing.
Sasuke peeping in the shower. For shame! XD.
Neji giving Sasuke and Naruto porn O.O Holy shit! I can fully picture the smirk. And LOL, I wish my Karate instructor had given me porn XD. I may have paid attention more and stayed longer, of course I was like 12 at the time so probably not, where were those hills again?
And of course the masturbation. Naruto just whipping his stuff out and starting to pump like that, ZOMG! and then he said Sasuke name O.o, poor Sasuke. How the hell is he supposed to have any kind of self-control when the damn chibi does shit like that?? That scene was amazingly hott. Especially since no one touched anyone else. 10 points for creative ways of working in smut XD
Huggles - Thanks so much for the update. The more you write the more I fall in love ♥ Please update soon(-ish, take as much time as you need) @--'-,---
Highlights for me:
Naruto sucking on Sasuke's finger. I've always found that adorable and I can almost picture the look on Sasuke's face XD.
Naruto and Sasuke's reaction to Gai O.o, LOL. I have no idea what I would do if I ever met anyone like Gai in real life. It's a toss up between running for the hills or finding him horridly fascinating and amusing.
Sasuke peeping in the shower. For shame! XD.
Neji giving Sasuke and Naruto porn O.O Holy shit! I can fully picture the smirk. And LOL, I wish my Karate instructor had given me porn XD. I may have paid attention more and stayed longer, of course I was like 12 at the time so probably not, where were those hills again?
And of course the masturbation. Naruto just whipping his stuff out and starting to pump like that, ZOMG! and then he said Sasuke name O.o, poor Sasuke. How the hell is he supposed to have any kind of self-control when the damn chibi does shit like that?? That scene was amazingly hott. Especially since no one touched anyone else. 10 points for creative ways of working in smut XD
Huggles - Thanks so much for the update. The more you write the more I fall in love ♥ Please update soon(-ish, take as much time as you need) @--'-,---
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you totally need to update this like right now! i like this very much and i have to know what happens next.
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update faster at fanfiction.net!!!
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What did happen? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An update yeay. Do it again soon
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this chapter was so good.
(btw: I love your style!!!!)
I can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon! XD
(btw: I love your style!!!!)
I can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon! XD