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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Fabulous chapter. Keep them coming. Ja.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Would like to read more. :D
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update.
This story is awesome.
Update soon please.
This story is awesome.
Update soon please.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And the suspense thikens! I REALLY thought that what Kenji did was unfair and uncalled for. He is the biggest fictional fictional character I have ever had the displeasure to read... although he also sounds like some sort of crutial part of this whole thing, I don't know why though. Can't wait for the next bit!!
-Damp *I wonder if Naruto really is a medical miracle.*
-Damp *I wonder if Naruto really is a medical miracle.*
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how the story is going as of now i think the only flaw is when Kenji screamed mommy. Oh also i wish kenji would have been pulverized. Harming Naruto is a sin punishable by slow, horrendous, terrible, unspeakable, painful forms of torture to death.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I love this story. I love the fact that it's actually showing what happened in the past prior to the forcing upon Naruto. I'm not good with super long reviews usually, so I'm going to keep it short and simple; It's good. I love it. Please update soon.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why does Naruto heal so quickly? Does he have the kyuubi sealed in him in this story?
Anyway, good chapter. Can't wait for the update.
Anyway, good chapter. Can't wait for the update.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that rocked! I love your ideas. can't wait for the next chapter please update soon.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Motto motto motto motto motto motto MOTTO!!!!!!!
must know what happens next
keep up the good work
ur doin a great job ^_^^_^^_^^_^
Update soon onegai
JA"NE =D
must know what happens next
keep up the good work
ur doin a great job ^_^^_^^_^^_^
Update soon onegai
JA"NE =D
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. You've planned it out masterfully. I love the back and forth between the present and the past. It's so distracting, I mean there's angst and heaviness and then the memories are light and wonderful. Even with Naruto getting beat up, which was scary. Sasuke and Naruto got along so well, and they all acted like boys their ages actually do. That was such a perfect 'little boy who only thinks he's grown' reaction, on Kenji's part, I can see it happening. And Naruto healing like that and how you tied that into why Sasuke went into the memory. Not to mention Sasuke's reasons for calling Sakura. All masterful, and so very sweet. Even the way Naruto is angling his questioning. I love this. It won't be long though will it? I can see you coming to a head soon-ish, and while that makes me sad it's okay, cause it just fits so perfectly. Whenever I find a story like this I wish AFF had a way to store favourites. It's okay though, it's not like I'm going to be forgetting it anytime soon. Thanks so much for the update XD.