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for Nameless Desires

by Jelp

person onobaby
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is good. Like to know where you are going with this story.
person kiki
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very good! I will wait for the next one! Please hurry!
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
welll....you've got my attention. i look foward to the next update.
person bevino
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would be very happy if you continued this one. You really know what to write, and what to make a reader interested very quickly, and I also like the other of your work.

Anyhow, I really like the idea, and I really like the story - it is really beautiful. Thank you!
person Menow
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanna know why, too!
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O you chose to leave it there? that's just cruel O_O
Because I want to know too heh :D interestign so far and I'd like to read more, I enjoyed reading how they were when they were younger and how teh friendship came to be :) it was nice and I felt sad for both of them that they didn't really have anyone. But yeah... continue soon?

Hina xXxx
person mee
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn you're good....now i want to know why, too :D
person hisoka
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
confusion. i thougyht they had a nice relationship back then, what happened?
updates?
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great so far! I can't wait to find out what else happened between them. :)
person beautifullove348
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg omg! Best story ever. I loved how the flashback in the middle just somehow fit so perfectly in the story! And the cliffie at the end argggghhh! Please update soon I can't wait!