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for Nameless Desires

by Jelp

schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the hell!(exclamation, not question) That was some crazy shit all up on the end there! With Naruto and the C-section and the still birth and the Sakura trauma! Thank goodness you didn't write all that out, I would have keeled over from the angst! Still, the whole story was great...the end really was a huge shock for me though. I'm glad I read it through, but cosmos...I don't think my heart could have taken much more of that suspensive angst.
person Lola
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Any hope for a sequel?
person LadyWolf
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really loved reading this...>!!
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you soo much for this story, you are a credit to the storytellers!! I love the preg. hook. If you are still writing, I look forward to reading more of your completed works.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG where have i been?! just read the last couple of chapters, i didnt realise you had completed it. So exellent, i'm almost at a loss for all the praise i want to give you. I meant i felt like MY heart had bottomed out when naruto said he had done the posing thing so sas would be interested in him. I was like *scream* oh my god naruto liked him?! Then how the whole thing was a misunderstanding and it was totally realistic, sometimes you read stories where the characters misinterpret each other's actions but it just comes off as retarded and u just want to hit them for being so dunce. But yours wasnt like that, i soo saw where each of them was coming from. Then that night when naruto shut the door because he didnt want sasuke to leave and he whispered in sas' ear that he wouldnt tell him no. It was just so AWESOME! bah. i must sound like a complete moron lol

lastly i worry for the daughter, seems all uchihas (other than sasuke) are CURSED. so aahh good luck to her!

ADORED this story. kudos to you.
person hisoka
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great,never thought naruto would be a mother in this story and never woulda thought he wouldnt tell his child about it but breaking people isnt always fun especially when its some one you care about.glad you finished and cant wait for your next story(if their is one any time soon)good luck
~kurosaki hisoka
person ringpop
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was very entertaining! thank you!
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!! I'm glad it had a happy ending and that Naruto and Sasuke even have a daughter together. Thanks for this story! :)
person blueh
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Happy ending! Very nice indeed. I really enjoyed your story. I hope you'll keep writing.
person Allys
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, are you fucking kidding?? I ADORE this ending!!! We got more smut, we got a BABY!! LOL, a fifteen year old baby, but a baby nevertheless XD. I'm sorry to ehar about Sakura that part was a little sad, but everything else was perfect and fantastic! I was a little weirded out by the ghost thing and then they started fighting about it and it was hilarious XD. I love that they had a baby! LOL, XD. And the fight on the stairs, heh *Loves* Thank you so much for writing this XD, and Congratulations on it being Finished!! I'm always thrilled to bits when authors finish things *Huggles u* You Rock! Thank you so much ;).