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for Nameless Desires

by Jelp

person beautifullove348
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg omg! Best story ever. I loved how the flashback in the middle just somehow fit so perfectly in the story! And the cliffie at the end argggghhh! Please update soon I can't wait!
person Allys
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn... What do I think? I think you need to continue this cause I'm dying to know the answer to that question. Not to mention I wouldn't mind a flashback of the incident. I can't even tell why exactly he's angry. If he's angry that it happened at all, or angry at the way it happened, or angry cause he thought it meant nothing, or just that he missed him, LOL. Please continue.
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-flail- This is gr9. You have to continuuuue. D:
person chineseartist
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaah! i don't know what i expected when i clicked on this story, but that sure as hell wasn't it! but it sounds cool, and there's always the possibility of a new relationship, so keep up the good work, and i'll keep an eye out for the rest of the story. I like the dialogue and interaction between sasuke and naruto in the flashback, you make them seem human, not just stock characters. their personality shines through. good job and good luck.
person CrimsonLover363
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think this is cool!!
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...how....when....damn your good! ha! I wanna know why too! I wanna know how that got to that point! Crazy shit man! Crazy..but I like the idea. It's sounds great! I hope you update it soon, and mine...and restless...Hmmm someone's a busy bee!
person Rosebud
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is so good! Please update soon!!!!!
person dragonfire04
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story update soon.
person Blood Stained Butterfly
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I love it. I want to read more. Update soon please.
person Sama
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm seriously in love with this story already!! Please, please you have to update!! This is already going into my favorites and I cannot wait until you update again!!! Great job! Ttul!!!