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Naruto had a C-Section!!! Sasuke and Naruto are the biological parents of Mumei?!!! It was a miracle that Naruto was even able to carry the baby for 7 months!!!????

WTF HAPPENED HERE!!

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-Damp *No, I do get the general of what happened over the years. . .but an even clearer explanation would be nice.*

Story turned out great, wonderful and unexpected ending. Fantastic work!

I love the surprise ending! This is the first Mpreg that surprised me. Usually I know about it before hand but I love it that it came as a shock. Cool. The foreboding of their child having blue eyes made me suspicious immediately. Very nice. The decisions they made afterwards made a lot of sense too. It's great that this turned out to be a modern day Mpreg. A first for me. What a roller coaster ride it was. I had no idea how this was going to end either. It felt open-ended for a good or bad ending. The best part of reading a story is thinking up many different ways events could unfold. You could continue this from Mumei’s point of view. A series of stories of her snooping around to find out what else happened. It’s written all over her face that she’s not done finding out what’s going on by a long shot. Hahaha What a cute kid. You have a lot of talent. Thanks so much not just for writing but for finishing it too! Not many writers have your dedication to finish what they started. I salute you.

I love the ending. Great job. Look forward to reading your future stories. Take care and god bless.

even though it's over i have to say that i loved nameless desires and the ending was the shit. you really surpised me at the end (again with the slick surprises) with how you turned this into a mpreg fic (even if it is on the down low). are you going to do anything about sasuke and naruto's daughter finding out that they are her biological parents. ithink that would be interesting especially when you add in the fact that sakura is crazy and thinks she is her and sai's child. anyway i just want to say thanks for always giving me something entertaining to read and now i will be anxiously awaiting the update on mine as well as the sequel to restless.

that was awesome! i love you for this. the very end part seemed a little rushed, but that had to be expected with so much info coming all at once. i'm so glad they got a happy ending. and a kid at that, though i'm not too fond of mpreg. can't wait to see more from you!

I loved it! OMG... *speechless*
You're an awesome writer!
I look forward to more wonderful stories from you! ^^

Very nice ending. I thoroughly enjoyed this story to the last sentence.

Wonderful!!! I loved it! Keep writing great stories. Ja!

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! That was so kawaii for an ending I was scared you weren't plaing on finishing it. THANK YOU I loved the story!!!