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for Nameless Desires

by Jelp

schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Right when it looked like they could get together finally, you threw a curveball!! But it does add more to the story by adding a new conflict for them. But poor Naruto!!!
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wife?! Oh my god, talk about a stunner. I had thought girlfriend or something due to the calls. What is going to happen now?

I love this story! Good pacing, nice use of flashbacks. Don't keep us on edge for much longer, please!
person Chria
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU! That cliffhanger rocked! I was expecting a happy ending but bam I get knocked the fuck out when the word wife was said. That's so realistic. Once you finally solve one problem two more pop up. lol I have no idea how this is going to end now. I'm glad Sasuke is married, I wouldn't want him to be alone for life due to a misunderstanding. Great job. Much love for every word and the plot is godly~
person Huck
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, it's so captivating and intense. I love the different point of views you use. Don't apologize for the cliffhangers, they definitely work in your favour. Update soon!
person Damp
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew the lady, who had called earilier, was his wife!! OOOOOOOHHHHHGHH How're you going to explain THIS one Sasuke!!!!!

-Damp *I am going to be practically hanging on every word come the next chappie*
person hisoka
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, more explanations, sasukes got a shit load to explaine all the time
person LadyWolf
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHo the hell is he married to????? HUH!!!! Ahhhh it better not be sakura!!!

At this point I really don't like cliffies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope ya post something soon, Please!!!!!


I need to know who the hell is his wife!!!!! (better not be Ino Pig!)



Sorry about the ranting....i get kinda worked up when I read some some good stuff!!!!!!

:O)
person Kool_Ayame
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are soooooooo mean. That was a major cliff. I don't think I could find a cliff more cliffy than that arg... Good Job
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH wow... I thought that this angsty mess was ending only to find, dun dun dun! another cliffy and twist to the plot! And I am amazed, oddly glad you didn't end it at that misunderstanding. But.......wife? wtf...oh poor naruto, and Sasuke. (but now I feel worse for my #1 cutie!)
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wife??!!! WIFE??!!! oh my god!!! I'm right along there with Naruto in a sudden feeling of WTF anger and betrayal!!

You know its a good story when the reader is all into it and has her heart swelling with their painfully long term misunderstanding suddenly on the verge of mending itself.. then the outrage of hearing he has a wife! Oh my god!! NO!! What will happen next? Oh my god! I need to know! Update soon, will you? He'd better not be married to Sakura. Then he'll never be able talk his way out of this! :x

I'm waiting with baited breath for your next chapter. Keep up the good work. Seriously.