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for Nameless Desires

by Jelp

person ephi
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FUCK!!!!!

HO MY GOD *starts to tear own hair out*. You left one hell of a cliffhanger there. I like your style---the story transitioned from point to point very well. Minus a few grammatical errors here and there, and you'd have a flawless piece of work. Plus, I'm glad you've at least referenced real Asian items and places into your work. I really hope you update this soon (because I am DYING here because of that cliffhanger).

. . .No man, seriously, I'm dying. Like "a knife in the gut" kind of dying. I haven't had a good surprise like this in a while (XD)
person Allys
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Jelp!!! What do I think????? I think I'm going to kill somebody!!! His WIFE!!!!! WTF??? Evilest Fucking cliffie!! Noooooo!!!!! I was all happy and trying not to cry - that was so fucked up. Oh God!! This is why conversation is key!! Holy shit, and now a wife!! LOL, actually I'm kinda glad, cause it means the story doesn't end here, XD. I'm having way too much fun for me to want this to ever end. But that's a major obstacle. Damn and LOL, Sasuke really, a wife?? How the hell did that happen? Omg... This story is great by the way. I'm so fucking thrilled right now, LOL. Wow, talk about plot twists. Life is so fucked up. Please god, it's not Sakura is it?? Uuuugggghhh!!! LOL. *Glomps u* Thank you sooo much for the update. Please please, I try my best not to pester authors, but please update soon!! ♥
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a mean, mean cliffhanger. :( if these two don't get a happy ending i think i might cry. pleasepleaseplease update soon!!!
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha..... "Your wife?" oh dear.... i love this keep it up!
person il duce
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH the replies you're getting must be amusing to you. i feel the same way though. A WIFE????? i can't wait for that next chapter ;-; i wonder what you have up your sleeve? :D
i like ito en's jasmine green tea!! yumm! :D and their oolong tea too but since you mentioned it, i want some of that tea that sasuke likes :P whatever it was! x_x i bet it's the one i always want to get but i end up buying the jasmine green tea instead.
person beekayz
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MAN! That was the king of all cliffhangers! Omfg poor Naruto. This story is so amazing, I love how you narrated it and wow. I really can't wait to see what happens next, holy shit. <33333333333
person GuideShadow
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I liked this chapter. The confusion is finally explained, I feel so bad for the both of them. To live with guilt like that or to feel used by your best friend - I hope I never experience anything like that.
There's one really strong Asian liquer - from China I believe, and my aunt (who is a Chinese immigrant - she married into the family a couple years back) served it....both her and my aunt got drunk so fast they made out with each other O-o
person Ashlee
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, the wife part is just random. I wasn't expecting it at all!!
person Zrina
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O Wife???????
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH how i want to hurt you for ending it there but...I can't >_< because then a.)who would continue it and b.)how would i kill someone who is probally thousand miles away from me...anyways I demand more asap.